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she denies him the consolation of a cliche...
he said oh well -
it was good while
it lasted...
she said but if it had
been good
it would surely have lasted rather
longer...
it was good while
it lasted...
she said but if it had
been good
it would surely have lasted rather
longer...
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Re: she denies him the consolation of a cliche...
14th Feb 2015 00:25am
Ouch! That is a brutal come back! That made ME sting just reading it. I love your wit! Great write as always.
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re: Re: she denies him the consolation of a cliche...
14th Feb 2015 00:44am
Re: she denies him the consolation of a cliche...
14th Feb 2015 2:55am
we perform to the limit of our capabilities. too often, it isn't enough...
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re: Re: she denies him the consolation of a cliche...
16th Feb 2015 00:42am
Re: she denies him the consolation of a cliche...
14th Feb 2015 6:34am
I didn't know "it was good while it lasted' was a cliche, so maybe she didn't either! :)
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re: Re: she denies him the consolation of a cliche...
16th Feb 2015 00:46am
I think sometimes that everything
is a cliche...and then I think that
everything is a unique event...
and then sometimes I don't bother
to think at all..:)
is a cliche...and then I think that
everything is a unique event...
and then sometimes I don't bother
to think at all..:)
re: re: Re: she denies him the consolation of a cliche...
16th Feb 2015 1:57pm
Re: she denies him the consolation of a cliche...
14th Feb 2015 6:37am
re: Re: she denies him the consolation of a cliche...
16th Feb 2015 00:47am
Re: she denies him the consolation of a cliche...
14th Feb 2015 8:05pm
How ironic. I love your he said she said; lies all lies! Seriously, you should write a play on words. :)
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re: Re: she denies him the consolation of a cliche...
16th Feb 2015 00:50am
I've got one in my head -
star crossed lovers, family
fueds - the Montagues and
the consonants..:)
star crossed lovers, family
fueds - the Montagues and
the consonants..:)
Re: she denies him the consolation of a cliche...
14th Feb 2015 11:20pm
re: Re: she denies him the consolation of a cliche...
16th Feb 2015 00:51am
Re: she denies him the consolation of a cliche...
15th Feb 2015 9:31pm
Haha! A great piece of hard reality in this wonderful piece Paul.
Cheers...Harry
Cheers...Harry
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re: Re: she denies him the consolation of a cliche...
16th Feb 2015 00:54am
she said I could have been kinder,
but to tell you the truth
I thought was..:)
but to tell you the truth
I thought was..:)
Re: she denies him the consolation of a cliche...
16th Feb 2015 9:33pm
Sometimes the sprint works best ... Sometimes the marathon ... She sounds like she needs a decathlete ... Just not Bruce Jenner
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re: Re: she denies him the consolation of a cliche...
17th Feb 2015 00:28am