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Comfortable Shoes
in need of relaxation
forget about stress
wanna roam free
all i need is some
comfortable shoes
the kind that satisfy
brings me back
to our home
and your love
shitty days happen
that’s a fact
still i lace them up
and feel the cushion
of comfortable shoes
soles upon my soul
a gift from the heart
not about money
but the warmth of you
you’re my release
shelter from pain
i need you sweetie
and the gift of these
comfortable shoes
forget about stress
wanna roam free
all i need is some
comfortable shoes
the kind that satisfy
brings me back
to our home
and your love
shitty days happen
that’s a fact
still i lace them up
and feel the cushion
of comfortable shoes
soles upon my soul
a gift from the heart
not about money
but the warmth of you
you’re my release
shelter from pain
i need you sweetie
and the gift of these
comfortable shoes
Published 13th Feb 2015
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13th Feb 2015 1:50am
Great write, sometimes all we need is to kick back with some comfortable shoes on.
13th Feb 2015 1:53am
Thanks, Ms. Jackson.. and i agree.. you are most certainly right.. i appreciate the read, and your kind words..
Dave
Dave
Anonymous
13th Feb 2015 2:23am
It's in comfortable shoes where the real living and loving happens. Sure, lust happens with stilettos and leather boots...but the get down and dirty making things work happens in comfortable shoes! Nice write and good concept!
13th Feb 2015 3:13am
Thanks, Minerva.. and what you speak is the truth.. i appreciate the read, and your commentary..
Dave
Dave
13th Feb 2015 3:19am
Shoes are my weakness. They can be comfy and cozy or sexy and wicked....lol.
I'm so relaxed here Dave ; )
I'm so relaxed here Dave ; )
13th Feb 2015 3:26am
Thanks, Lena.. being comfy is important.. glad you feel relaxed here.. i appreciate the read, and your kind words..
Dave
Dave
23rd Feb 2015 4:38pm
23rd Feb 2015 5:24pm
Thanks, Villain.. i'm glad you liked this one.. i appreciate the read, your commentary, and most of all the add.. much appreciated..
Dave
Dave
