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Spirit
what you going to do if I forget
losing my thoughts
when I'm getting lost
sinking the boats around our hearts
you going to lead the way
be the bearer
fight your way through
as I fall
you going to gather me up
everything's alright
tell me it's ok
with a spirit seen
love desired
losing my thoughts
when I'm getting lost
sinking the boats around our hearts
you going to lead the way
be the bearer
fight your way through
as I fall
you going to gather me up
everything's alright
tell me it's ok
with a spirit seen
love desired
Published 11th Feb 2015
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11th Feb 2015 4:06pm
Everyone needs reassurance, a hand to hold in the dark. I hope you find your bearer if you haven't already. Great job, Rose!
11th Feb 2015 4:07pm
Anonymous
11th Feb 2015 5:03pm
I agree with crowfly. We all need a shoulder to lean on, a hug or a friendly ear to listen. I know this feeling. Well done!
11th Feb 2015 5:52pm
Thankyou
it was rather a quick write
glad I was able to hit onto something
it was rather a quick write
glad I was able to hit onto something
11th Feb 2015 7:51pm
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