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We Had Left
There I was,
broken
like a coffee cup
in the sink.
No longer strong,
bitter, or even sweet,
simply drained
of everything
we had left.
broken
like a coffee cup
in the sink.
No longer strong,
bitter, or even sweet,
simply drained
of everything
we had left.
Published 10th Feb 2015
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10th Feb 2015 1:19am
10th Feb 2015 1:30am
I've been writing a lot of shorter pieces recently, more so quotes in essence for my instagram. Thanks for the response, much appreciated.
Anonymous
10th Feb 2015 2:33am
i get this. 100%
so much in so few words. great little write.
so much in so few words. great little write.
10th Feb 2015 6:01am
Nice write.
You very effectively create the mood through the spare imagery.
You very effectively create the mood through the spare imagery.
Anonymous
10th Feb 2015 9:57am
Powerful poem...
10th Feb 2015 1:29pm
Thank you Minerva, William and Le Fay for your comments, the positive responses really mean a lot. Cheers!
11th Feb 2015 10:55pm
