Short and sweet

Most certainly short, and sweet, Tori.. nice ink..


Dave

wow I think there is more to this poem, a fond memory and maybe just a little scandalous?

I would definitely like to see this turned into something longer. It's still perfect in it's entirety, just want more! Thank you.

i will definitely look into it! It was an "in the heat of the moment" type of write. I'd love to look into it more

Short and (bitter) sweet I might call it. A short sweet hit at betrayal or desertion on his part.

i have felt this before. i have sat on my bed and wished that she could smell me on that fucking pillow. but ah well. i agree, that while it is great and punchy on it's own, it could be expanded. i'd like to see it!

I agree, it's outstanding brevity, still it's Ssssoooooo open to
addition lol. Sorta like... "I hope HE enjoyed kissin where I placed my cock, pissin creamy milk on the Plate he just licked, greedily ate... Lmao.