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Desending
Breathlessly he asked me,
his hands gripping my hips,
he asked me If I was ready,
My reply,
between the shouts,
wet desperate kisses,
the obscenities,
was to descend deep into love
never to rise till he became mine
and he was
his hands gripping my hips,
he asked me If I was ready,
My reply,
between the shouts,
wet desperate kisses,
the obscenities,
was to descend deep into love
never to rise till he became mine
and he was
Published 8th Feb 2015
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8th Feb 2015 6:44pm
This is one way to gauge a lover's true feelings, to find out if he'll follow you into deeper emotions. Emotions like love. You reinforce the passion with a truer sensitivity. Fine job, Rose.
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