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THE DETOUR

PLEASANT SUNDAY MORNINGS, THEY ARE ALMOST ALWAYS THAT WAY; UNLIKE THE AFTERNOONS, WITH THE IMPENDING DREAD OF WORK LOOMING; THE MORNINGS THOUGH, ARE MELANCHOLIC BLISS; DOWN, COMING DOWN; USUALLY QUIET AND PEACEFUL; WITH TIME, TO JUST BE AND MAYBE THINK; A CUP OF TEA, SOME INANE TELEVISION; A DAYDREAM IF YOU’RE LUCKY; THEN MID MORNING, A STRONG COFFEE; TOAST AND PEANUT BUTTER; A GOOD SHIT, WITH MAYBE A GREAT BOOK; IT DOESN’T GET MUCH BETTER; HOWEVER THE NICE HOT SHOWER COMES CLOSE; YOU SPRUCE UP; DRIVE DOWN TO THE SHOPS; BUY THE USUAL PAPER AND SUBWAY FOR YOUR DAD; GO VISIT HIM AND TALK ABOUT THIS AND THAT; THEN YOU SHAKE HANDS AND LEAVE; AND ON A WHIM, YOU TAKE THE U-TURN; DRIVE TO THE SERVO, TAKE OUT SOME CASH; DRIVE AROUND THE CORNER, PARK CONSPICUOUSLY OUTSIDE THE CLUB; THE NEON SIGN INVITES YOU IN; YOU’RE A LITTLE SCARED, OF ALL SORTS OF THINGS; THE LADY BEHIND THE COUNTER, TALKS TO THE ASIAN MAN, ON THE OTHER SIDE; SHE IGNORES YOU AT FIRST; YOU LOOK AROUND; THE BOOTHS, THE FLASHING LIGHTS, ETCETERA, ETCETERA; YOU’VE BEEN HERE MANY TIMES BEFORE; NOT A LOT CHANGES, BUT IT’S STILL CLEAN AND THE AIRCONDITIONING IS WORKING WELL; YOU WAIT AT THE COUNTER AND SHE ASKS IF SHE CAN HELP? YOU RECOGNIZE HER AND THE EVOKING LOOK; YOU REMEMBER HER, FROM THAT TIME SHE DID A SHOW, WITH ONE OF THE GIRLS; MAYBE SHOWING THE YOUNG ONE THE ROPES; CAN SHE HELP ME? IT’S A LOADED QUESTION, BUT I’M NOT HERE TO PHILOSOPHIZE; I HEAR THE MUSIC AND ASK IF THERE ARE ANY SHOWS HAPPENING? SHE SAYS, "YES, WHAT ARE YOU LOOKING FOR? WE HAVE PEEP SHOWS AND PRIVATES”; HAS SHE RECOGNIZED ME FROM BEFORE? I DON’T THINK SO; MAYBE, MAYBE NOT; I LOOK AT THE BOOTHS, THEN LOOK AT HER; “I THINK I’D LIKE A PRIVATE, HOW MUCH ARE THEY?” I REMEMBER THE SIGNS, THEY SHOW THE PRICES FOR HOW MANY MINUTES; “HOW LONG WOULD YOU LIKE?” “I THINK 10 MINUTES SHOULD BE FINE” “THAT’LL BE $40” I PAY HER AND SHE YELLS OUT BACK; “PRIVATE! 10 MINUTES!” THEN SHE SAYS TO ME; “MIDDLE DOOR DOWN THE HALL, SHE’LL OPEN IT WHEN SHE’S READY, HER NAME’S PORSCHE, GREEK WITH BLONDE HAIR” I WAIT IN THE HALLWAY AND EVENTUALLY THE DOOR OPENS; SHE’S YOUNG AND GORGEOUS, BARELY DRESSED IN BLACK LACE PANTIES AND A BRA; “HI THERE, COME ON IN … TAKE A SEAT … JUST THE 10 MINUTES?” “YES THANKS”, I’M QUITE NERVOUS; THE ROOM IS SMALL; IN ONE CORNER, A CURVED CHAISE WITH INBUILT MUSIC; PORSCHE BENDS DOWN AND CHOOSES A TRACK; I SIT ON THE CHAISE IN THE OPPOSITE CORNER; TO MY LEFT ON THE WALL IS A TISSUE DISPENSER; THE CUTE YOUNG THING TAKES OFF HER BRA, TO REVEAL PERFECT REAL BREASTS, LAYS BACK AND REMOVES HER PANTIES; I ASK IF I CAN PLAY WHILE SHE PLAYS? SHE SAYS, “OF COURSE” I NOTICE HOW BEAUTIFUL SHE IS AND I TELL HER; SHE SAYS THANKYOU; SHE’S NO NATURAL BLONDE, BUT SHE IS RAVISHING; SHE’S LOOKING AT ME, WITH MY HAND DOWN MY PANTS; WHILE SHE TOUCHES HER PERFECT BREASTS, THEN HER SHAVED HOODY LIPPY LITTLE PUSSY; SHE CARESSES AND RUBS, THEN INSERTS HER FINGERS; MY PANTS COME DOWN AROUND MY ANKLES; SHE TAKES OFF HER HEELS AND GETS COMFORTABLE; I’M STROKING MYSELF AND WAKING THE LITTLE FELLOW UP; SHE GLANCES EVERY NOW AND THEN, WHILE SHE PUTS HER LEGS OUT AND UP, RUBS AND FINGERS THAT SHAVED PUSSY; SHE’S SMALL, LESS THAN SIZE 8; I LOOK AT HER BLONDE HAIR, HER DARK EYEBROWS; THAT NOT PRETTY, NOT CUTE, BUT STUNNING FACE; I SCAN DOWN TO THOSE PERFECT 34 C’S, WITH SMALL PERT AND ERECT NIPPLES, BROWNISH PINK; JUST LIKE THAT NICE LITTLE PUSSY, A LITTLE FLAPPY, BUT NOT TOO MUCH (ALTHOUGH I DO LIKE THAT); SHE’S GOT TWO FINGERS DEEP IN THERE, REACHES FOR A LITTLE LUBE, SPRAYS ONCE AND RETURNS TO HER OBJECT OF DESIRE; LOOKS UP AT ME WANKING MY GROWING DICK, HE’S OLD AND FAT BUT GETTING BIG AND LONGISH; SHE LICKS HER LIPS SUBTLY, GETS UP AND BENDS OVER, THEN SPANKS HER TINY BEHIND; NOW THAT IS A FINE BACKSIDE, SMALL, SHAPELY AND TANNED; I STROKE ON, IN T-SHIRT AND SANDSHOES; I’M AWARE OF MY TIME LIMIT AND CHECK MY WATCH; 5 MINUTES TO GO; SHE TURNS OVER, LAYS BACK AND SPREADS THOSE THIN LONG LEGS, TOUCHES HER NIPPLES AND PLAYS WITH THAT PUSSY; I CAN'T SMELL HER OR SEE ANY SIGN OF WETNESS; HER ARSEHOLE IS BIGISH AND BROWN; SHE LOOKS KIND OF DIRTY BUT CLEAN; A SORE ON EACH BUTT CHEEK AND ONE OR TWO ON HER LEGS; MAYBE SHE’S INTO DRUGS? SHE NOTICES MY COCK IS QUITE LARGE NOW AND BECOMES MORE ANIMATED IN HER SELF FUCKING; I’M STROKING FAST, SHE NOTICES, WATCHING THE STRAINED EXPRESSION ON MY FACE; I TELL HER I’M CLOSE AND REACH FOR THE TISSUES; I TAKE 8 IN CASE I COME A LOT; SHE PLAYS ON, SPANKS HER TINY DIRTY BUT CLEAN ARSE; I SEE HER BEAUTY; I STAND AND COME INTO THE TISSUES, BEING CAREFUL NOT TO DRIP ON THE FLOOR; AS I’M COMING, I HEAR HER SAY THANKS; SHE GETS UP AND FUMBLES FOR HER CLOTHES; I FINISH MY RELEASE AND WIPE MYSELF DRY, REACH FOR THE SANITARY DISPOSAL UNIT, TRY TO SLIDE THE LID AND REALIZE IT LIFTS; I DEPOSIT MY MOIST TISSUE WAD, PULL UP MY PANTS AND ADJUST MYSELF; SHE’S LOOKING DOWN AT HER PANTIES AND SAYS, “I HOPE THEY’RE NOT INSIDE OUT”; I SAY, “THAT COULD BE LUCKY”; SHE SMILES AND SAYS, “I ALWAYS WORRY ABOUT THAT”; I SAY, “YOU MIGHT BE LUCKY OFTEN”; SHE SMILES AGAIN; I REACH INTO MY POCKET AND HAND HER A $20 NOTE; “THAT’S FOR YOU”; “THANKYOU”; SHE ARRANGES HERSELF;  I MOVE TO THE DOOR AND OPEN IT; SHE SAYS, “HAVE A NICE DAY”; I SAY, “SAME TO YOU”; SHE SAYS, “I BET IT’S NICE AND HOT OUT THERE”; I SAY, “YEAH BUT IT’S LOVELY & COOL IN HERE”; SHE SAYS, “IT’S THE COOLEST ROOM IN THE PLACE”; I SMILE AND SAY, “THANKS, HAVE A GOOD DAY”; SHE SAYS, “YOU TOO”; I CLOSE THE DOOR, WALK DOWN THE HALLWAY, SAY THANKYOU TO THE COUNTER LADY AND LEAVE THE BUILDING; AS I DRIVE, I THINK ABOUT HOW NICE SHE WAS, PORSCHE OF COURSE; FRIENDLY BUT NOT OVERLY; KIND AND GENUINE; NO FRILLS, JUST LOVELY; SHE COULD HAVE SAID AND DONE ALL THOSE OTHER THINGS, BUT SHE DIDN’T; SHE JUST DID WHAT SHE HAD TO AND WAS GRACIOUS; SHE HAD CLASS; I SHOULD HAVE TIPPED MORE; WHAT A CHEAPSKATE, BUT THAT MIGHT BE OVER THE TOP AND THAT AINT COOL; SHE WAS FINE; I WANT TO SEE HER AGAIN, BUT THAT AINT PRACTICAL; I DON’T KNOW WHEN SHE’S ON AND I’M NOT THAT KIND TO TRY & FIND OUT; I SURE WISH HER WELL THOUGH; IF ONLY I COULD SAVE HER, BUT FROM WHO? SOME YOUNG PUNK, WITH A SEEMINGLY ENDLESS SUPPLY, OF WHAT SHE THINKS SHE NEEDS; SOMEONE WITH BETTER LOOKS, A BETTER BODY, MORE EXCITEMENT AND MORE FUN THAN ME; NOT TO MENTION THE HARDER DICK, ETCETERA, ETCETERA; HER WITH EVERYTHING TO GAIN; ME WITH EVERYTHING TO LOSE; I DO HOLD A FEW CARDS; EXPERIENCE, RESPECT, LOVE; VERSUS YOUNG LUST AND ADVENTURE; HE WINS HANDS DOWN; SHE WINS TOO AND WE ALL LOSE AND WIN; DAMN SHE’S BEAUTIFUL; PORSCHE …; GREEK HAH; THOSE EYEBROWS WERE DARK; LOVELY LITTLE THING; I HOPE SHE’S OK; I’LL THINK ABOUT HER OFTEN.
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