Much  too loud

It's lyrical. When I read it out loud, the words instantly slip off the tongue like an intro to a choris.

I take this as a compliment, forever_young, and am glad about your wording. Thank you so much. A song for the heartbroken.

A heartbreaking write...beautifully worded Iris...ox

Thank you so much, JeJe!
Let the silence be everywhere ...

the confusing sound of silence. how well you express the agony, Chi...

Like the great Catullus once said:
 
I hate and I love. Perhaps you ask why I do this?
I do not know, but I feel it happen and I am torn apart.  
 
That's how I feel, too. Thanks, John.

a silent goodbye
can come over one
like a wave...

Like a killer wave ...
Not a comforting comment, Paul, but a wise one. Thank you.

So painful. Sometimes the noise diminishes once we accept, we may never understand it all.

Xoxo

When silence leaves us deaf
what's left? xoxo

I am empathetic to your pain...thank you for the authenticity of your writing.

I can't but be authentic, I'm afraid. I appreciate your warm words much, Gahddess_Worship.

The sudden abruption of farewell..nice one,chi

Hi and bye
in a single sigh.
Thank you so much, Fay.

Miss Chi,

you never realize how loud silence is until it all stops. Great write!

tornado

Yes, at fancy party for example, when you tell a dirty joke and just in that very moment the music stops ... And the silence is all yours :-). I appreciate your cool comments :-).