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Death of a Poet...
The situation, so unreal
this is beginning to feel
mocked, like a parody
seems no one covets
a passionate me
So, far be it
for this heart to spark
rather mend the scarred issue
alone, cold...dark
Fuck the naysayers
of a rumored "true romance"
giving freely, no strings
never had a chance
A 'encapsulated fate'
bloodied caterpillar
not destined to fly
but trapped in a capsule,
tears catapulted though
as through a pistol...
As open hearted
kindness just took it's
last stance...
this is beginning to feel
mocked, like a parody
seems no one covets
a passionate me
So, far be it
for this heart to spark
rather mend the scarred issue
alone, cold...dark
Fuck the naysayers
of a rumored "true romance"
giving freely, no strings
never had a chance
A 'encapsulated fate'
bloodied caterpillar
not destined to fly
but trapped in a capsule,
tears catapulted though
as through a pistol...
As open hearted
kindness just took it's
last stance...
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Re: Death of a Poet...
5th Feb 2015 4:56pm
Really nice write! very descriptive emotional feel reflecting the world that is ours as poets, and writers.
Cheers! Scot.
Cheers! Scot.
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6th Feb 2015 5:58pm
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5th Feb 2015 7:55pm
wow I want more of this genre of ink, when u write this way u give me lady wood!
loves u brother, fight the struggle
Zazzles xoxox
loves u brother, fight the struggle
Zazzles xoxox
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re: Re: Death of a Poet...
6th Feb 2015 6:01pm
Sadly, I don't plan these inks... They just kinda happen
so I've idea when the next one will 'come' to me... But I thank u much sweetheart
so I've idea when the next one will 'come' to me... But I thank u much sweetheart
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7th Feb 2015 4:25am
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6th Feb 2015 2:46am
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6th Feb 2015 6:28pm
Just that one huh? Oh well guess I need to be
more diligent in my approach... Thank u my friend
more diligent in my approach... Thank u my friend
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6th Feb 2015 6:30pm
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6th Feb 2015 6:17pm
"Bloodied caterpillar not destined to fly" oh my that line just kills so softly..so beautifully sad..wonderful ink Poetik
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6th Feb 2015 6:30pm
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6th Feb 2015 9:49pm
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7th Feb 2015 1:35pm
Thank u, but I no longer have a desire to care
or expose my heart anymore...
or expose my heart anymore...
Re: Death of a Poet...
8th Feb 2015 1:13pm
I'd miss your ink. You seem to have lost faith in your readers? The inside of your heart is dear to us, believe me, Poe. Write on, please.xxx
I especially like your recent works since they're so meaningful. And please don't twist my words and say: Oh, just the recent ones? NO! Not just the recent onces but ESPECIALLY those. Shine on!
I especially like your recent works since they're so meaningful. And please don't twist my words and say: Oh, just the recent ones? NO! Not just the recent onces but ESPECIALLY those. Shine on!
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re: Re: Death of a Poet...
8th Feb 2015 1:48pm
Thank you sweet friend. No lost faith in love
It's only made me a fool... Don't know whether
I will post anything again...
It's only made me a fool... Don't know whether
I will post anything again...
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8th Feb 2015 2:17pm
I doubt that anyone can make himself a fool for love. The fools are those who fool you *hugs*!!!
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Re: Death of a Poet...
3rd Mar 2015 4:36pm
I think I best be following you man.
You poems speak to me and I just fell in love with this piece right here.
The first stanza touch home, oh yes it did.
Darker.
You poems speak to me and I just fell in love with this piece right here.
The first stanza touch home, oh yes it did.
Darker.
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re: Re: Death of a Poet...
3rd Mar 2015 10:50pm
Aaaawwww I'm so humbled n honored! Thank you
you sweet beautiful soul, your support means a ton to me :)
you sweet beautiful soul, your support means a ton to me :)
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4th Apr 2015 12:26pm
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4th Apr 2015 8:52pm
Once more u have me blushing keep it up
n u will have me going into 'sugar shock'
from all that sweetness lol thanks!
n u will have me going into 'sugar shock'
from all that sweetness lol thanks!
Re: Death of a Poet...
Anonymous
- Edited 19th Apr 2015 2:59pm
19th Apr 2015 2:56pm
Firstly DONT YOU DARE LEAVE!! Secondly, never say never and thirdly this poem is amazing as is the poet.
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re: Re: Death of a Poet...
19th Apr 2015 3:49pm
Lol yes ma'am lol... It gets tough but I try to hang in there
You give me reason to hang a lil longer though :)
Thank u! :)
You give me reason to hang a lil longer though :)
Thank u! :)