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Lover and I
My aged old gypsy lover, you got me
traveling on your charabanc,
I do believe we have been chosen.
Again
taking flight
I am
this is me
away to you
let it be said I've flown
gone away
who's spreading arms
wings of reckless abandonment
I do concede my all
watch me fall
falling
for you
into you
and all we ever will be
My gypsy lover and I.
traveling on your charabanc,
I do believe we have been chosen.
Again
taking flight
I am
this is me
away to you
let it be said I've flown
gone away
who's spreading arms
wings of reckless abandonment
I do concede my all
watch me fall
falling
for you
into you
and all we ever will be
My gypsy lover and I.
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Re: Lover and I
Anonymous
4th Feb 2015 2:29pm
some days i am extremely drawn to gypsy culture. being on the move all the time, never tied down. and then some days i am terrified of it. i feel like this speaks to exactly that. good write, rose. very good!
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re: Re: Lover and I
4th Feb 2015 2:36pm
aww thank you dear and thank you for the RL too xD
I've always been drawn to the gypsy culture
I've always been drawn to the gypsy culture
Re: Lover and I
4th Feb 2015 2:36pm
Great write, Rose.. this was a stellar write, really liked it.. thanks for sharing..
Dave
Dave
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re: Re: Lover and I
4th Feb 2015 2:51pm
thankyou Dave
thank you very much :)
it's a pleasure to share with everyone
thank you very much :)
it's a pleasure to share with everyone
Re: Lover and I
4th Feb 2015 8:47pm
There's a romantic mystery to the Gypsy life, the freedom and wanderlust. I think you've captured that well in just a few brief lines. Really fine job, Rose.
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5th Feb 2015 5:30am
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4th Feb 2015 8:48pm
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Re: Lover and I
4th Feb 2015 10:31pm
You once said a poem of mine was my voice.
This is your voice. I see and hear your heart.
Thanks for share
This is your voice. I see and hear your heart.
Thanks for share
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