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Layla
The story made
played
cooling the scene down
taking center stage
the piano keys
floating
drifting
rising up
opening the soul
pathways
mournful the guitar solo
wailing
pulling
the heart strings
playing for hope and joy
love
to be made present.
*Inspired by the piano piece at the end
of the extended musical number by Eric Clapton's Layla*
played
cooling the scene down
taking center stage
the piano keys
floating
drifting
rising up
opening the soul
pathways
mournful the guitar solo
wailing
pulling
the heart strings
playing for hope and joy
love
to be made present.
*Inspired by the piano piece at the end
of the extended musical number by Eric Clapton's Layla*
Published 3rd Feb 2015
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3rd Feb 2015 6:25am
the drift of the piano's melody, the wailing of the guitar, feeling the music in your poetry...
3rd Feb 2015 6:46am
3rd Feb 2015 7:50am
3rd Feb 2015 7:53am
Anonymous
3rd Feb 2015 10:24am
this is very good! it conjures that song quite nicely. :)
3rd Feb 2015 7:08pm
3rd Feb 2015 2:12pm
3rd Feb 2015 7:09pm
Anonymous
- Edited 3rd Feb 2015 9:51pm
3rd Feb 2015 3:19pm
Rose,
(sorry meds need to be refilled.....)
How can one not hear it with what you have laid before us :-) enjoyed!
tornado
(sorry meds need to be refilled.....)
How can one not hear it with what you have laid before us :-) enjoyed!
tornado
