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Pink Satin
To my chagrin
I am in
A mood of sin
Unrest akin
To Shakespeare’s pen,
Of patience thin
These thoughts again
Of scented skin
A hard extend
Entering deep within
Slick slit satin
That I could contend
With
Masterful skill.
I am in
A mood of sin
Unrest akin
To Shakespeare’s pen,
Of patience thin
These thoughts again
Of scented skin
A hard extend
Entering deep within
Slick slit satin
That I could contend
With
Masterful skill.
Published 29th Jan 2015
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29th Jan 2015 10:11pm
I definitely see the appeal in this. I admit, I am in a "mood of sin" myself. I love this. Very well written.
29th Jan 2015 10:13pm
This is written with consummate skill, Virginia. Interesting how you bring Shakespeare's pen into this. Fire burn and cauldron bubble!
29th Jan 2015 10:45pm
Anonymous
29th Jan 2015 11:20pm
Errrrrr body is in the mood for sin tonight! Is it a full moon or something?
Nice write.
Nice write.
30th Jan 2015 1:10am
I tried harder with this one :-)
enjoyed it just as much as the last one (lol)
a very clever write :-)
enjoyed it just as much as the last one (lol)
a very clever write :-)
Anonymous
30th Jan 2015 10:58am
A mood sin...what a delightful mood to be in! 😜
31st Jan 2015 3:44am
perhaps Shakespeare wrote to relieve the tension. but writing gives way to other desires...
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5th Feb 2015 00:39am
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5th Feb 2015 00:53am
this is fine i wish i could write with passion i see so many poets are doing like you however its
not too late i will try
not too late i will try
20th Jun 2015 1:40pm
Sinister write VP. This was short and to the point, like a skirt. But had all the necessary silk to keep it flowing. Excellent!
