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HARD
I am trying
To control
These fervent, struggling impulses
Wanting to discreetly
Or non-discreetly
Feel the solid, hardness
Of a rapacious dick
Against me, in me,
Throbbing urgently in my mouth.
I am trying
To control
My appetite
That destroys everything
But the imperative,
Desires of my cunt.
I am trying
To not desperately need
The empty, pulsing
Walls of my pussy
Filled.
Trying…
Very
HARD.
To control
These fervent, struggling impulses
Wanting to discreetly
Or non-discreetly
Feel the solid, hardness
Of a rapacious dick
Against me, in me,
Throbbing urgently in my mouth.
I am trying
To control
My appetite
That destroys everything
But the imperative,
Desires of my cunt.
I am trying
To not desperately need
The empty, pulsing
Walls of my pussy
Filled.
Trying…
Very
HARD.
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Re: HARD
Anonymous
29th Jan 2015 8:45pm
right there with you.
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Anonymous
30th Jan 2015 2:16am
no shit!
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Re: HARD
29th Jan 2015 8:46pm
Hot write, Virginia.. nice flow on this erotic.. the ink is still steaming.. nicely done..
Dave
Dave
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29th Jan 2015 10:29pm
Re: HARD
29th Jan 2015 8:49pm
This poem was very HARD for me to read without losing control. WOW! This is a very inspiring and well written poem! It captures an urgency and a deep longing. Great job Virginia!
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29th Jan 2015 10:29pm
Re: HARD
29th Jan 2015 9:42pm
You have a very concise way with lust, Virginia. This is strong and to the point. Let me know if you need any help!
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29th Jan 2015 10:30pm
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Anonymous
29th Jan 2015 10:01pm
what is not being full-filled...?
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Anonymous
30th Jan 2015 10:51am
Nice! 😜
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Re: HARD
6th Feb 2015 11:50pm
ohhh your a naughty, naughty ,girl, mmmmm...
haha great write!
Cheers! Scot.
haha great write!
Cheers! Scot.
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Re: HARD
12th Feb 2015 00:33am
Really felt your stregth cracking
With surges of urges
Great use of words and style
That made us feel the way you do
With surges of urges
Great use of words and style
That made us feel the way you do
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