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Long Awaited Hug...
Touched,
only in fantasies
imagined,
repeatedly for years
wanted,
only never to be realized
Regretted,
woefully shedding tears
Separated,
by duty and honor
star-crossed,
due to stubborn pride
fated,
their paths, again to cross
touched
...finally
eyes and hearts, open wide
only in fantasies
imagined,
repeatedly for years
wanted,
only never to be realized
Regretted,
woefully shedding tears
Separated,
by duty and honor
star-crossed,
due to stubborn pride
fated,
their paths, again to cross
touched
...finally
eyes and hearts, open wide
Published 29th Jan 2015
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29th Jan 2015 7:10pm
What a beautiful and completely relatable poem, Thank you for sharing.
Cheers! Scot.
Cheers! Scot.
29th Jan 2015 9:19pm
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29th Jan 2015 9:21pm
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29th Jan 2015 9:23pm
29th Jan 2015 9:46pm
Really innovative structure and wording, Deborah. You really convey the longing then provide a happy ending. Well done!
30th Jan 2015 4:52pm
30th Jan 2015 00:13am
This was a beautiful piece Deborah...very longing and full of saddened passion...
30th Jan 2015 1:46am
