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How Precious......
it felt lonely last night without your "Good Night"
when I woke this morning though your hugs and kisses were there
it made me think.....what if my "Good Night.....I Luv Ya xoxo :)"
were the last words I got to write to you
it made me sad going to bed without last shared emotions of the night
but then I read again the last words you spiritually whispered to me
they were the most precious of all.....always the last ones written between us
my heart was lifted to the clouds once more as I surrendered to dreams
felt our souls connect.....hearts hug.....spirits kiss
cause your last words are always.....
"I Love You xoxoxoxo"
when I woke this morning though your hugs and kisses were there
it made me think.....what if my "Good Night.....I Luv Ya xoxo :)"
were the last words I got to write to you
it made me sad going to bed without last shared emotions of the night
but then I read again the last words you spiritually whispered to me
they were the most precious of all.....always the last ones written between us
my heart was lifted to the clouds once more as I surrendered to dreams
felt our souls connect.....hearts hug.....spirits kiss
cause your last words are always.....
"I Love You xoxoxoxo"
Published 28th Jan 2015
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31st Jan 2015 2:05am
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28th Jan 2015 8:16pm
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31st Jan 2015 2:08am
Sweet S.......always happy to see your smile......glad I could bring warmth your way.....thank you for my smile.....xo :)
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28th Jan 2015 8:46pm
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31st Jan 2015 2:10am
28th Jan 2015 8:50pm
so beautiful lovely Flower those tender whispered words of love.. with love Crim
31st Jan 2015 2:12am
Sweet Crim......mmmm.....yes the whispers......always a sexy echo......thank you for the luv xo :)
Anonymous
28th Jan 2015 9:00pm
Such sweetness! 😊
31st Jan 2015 2:13am
28th Jan 2015 9:49pm
That's the finest form of reassurance, the simple words "I love you" even if they're repeated countless times. It's a form of punctuation within any romantic relationship. Your poem's precious, Flower.
31st Jan 2015 2:18am
Oh Crow.....you so get this......I hope my kart words to anyone is in luv.....specially those I do luv know that I do.....thank you for your wonderful words.....xo :)
29th Jan 2015 4:27am
Well, ES. We know that's not exactly how I write it. ;)
You write love so very well. Lovely ink!
xo :)
This is how it's done. Remember? :D
You write love so very well. Lovely ink!
xo :)
This is how it's done. Remember? :D
Hey EV......your write it magnificently.......luv inks you......thank you......I will remember.....xo :)
29th Jan 2015 1:49pm
31st Jan 2015 2:25am
Hey X.....happy to see you again......thank you for feeling the luv....xo :)
Anonymous
29th Jan 2015 2:07pm
missing the last words is always hard. when one gets used to those same words, over and over...every night...when they don't come....not good. BUT they will come again. thankfully.
good write.
good write.
31st Jan 2015 2:29am
Hi Minerva.......thank you for stopping by my way.......it is hard. It alwys a blessing when greeted again though......and ending with luv when once more......xo :)
flowergirl - Just when you're at the brink of tipping over into plummeting depression, there is reinvigorating poetic upliftment in your words and I'm startin' to feel a lot, lot better. How Precious......flowergirl. Very good work. Namyh
2nd Feb 2015 11:21pm
Awe Namyh.......what uplifting words back to me.......Iim sorry you're not feeling well......thank your for the smile upon my page.....xo :)
