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oh, ye dopey joker, you
playing foo'foofooly'doodah'boo
amidst famine & gluttony
in the same finesuper-stores
that yr ancestors was dreamin could
be sum'sorta Heaven...like to
keep the rabble in line, docile
& product'able in pat'riotic
imbecillary.....
you told me 'how-it-was'
when aye had no
need of any such prevaricated
information....
you...(& me),
be
all ways fore'given
in thee
I's of Thee L'ord , beliefing illusion
into lethal Delusion,
( though wee Must
)
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2015dkzkPoomistry\\FOTO:"PoorageForTheePoor"by;dkzk
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Published 27th Jan 2015
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27th Jan 2015 6:32pm
well from where I'm standing,
right in the middle of the frozen foods
aisle
be damned if I'm
going to swallow it...gulp...
right in the middle of the frozen foods
aisle
be damned if I'm
going to swallow it...gulp...
27th Jan 2015 6:45pm
27th Jan 2015 11:07pm
You should not have been violated in that manner. Wonderful poem. I love that waterfall. That's gorgeous.
violated?
can't allow myself to 'think' in such 'terms', but like the real realists say: "if it smells like shit, it probably ain't chocolate"
I don't Know what any of 'it' 'means' anymo.....seems like even the best intended 'meaning' is just a cover-up for some basic, pervasive, inexplicable, unknowable, crushing sadness ....but butt there's obviously something dreadfully 'wrong' wit my brain-function in the 21st century...but butt again, that's just a Lame Excuse for my selfish laziness & 'self fulfilling prophecy' of detachment*.
thank you *NOTE: I may use this as my next DUP 'confessional po-em' ...likely only to be acknowledged by you & Dart
PS: the 'waterfall' is actually a drain pipe from the 'country club' that sits up high on the dunes & empties onto the public access path to the beach.....just rainwater - I'm sure no sewage. Ha!
