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"Giving in Again."
Do You think if You were as,
"Fucked-up, " in the head, as
I Am, You could continue to
live
Would You Beg Them to unplug
the, "Life-support," as I have
If You had the same Fucking
twisted Mentality that I Tolerate;
(with Pain-killers and Sedatives
and nonstop Liquor Consumption
and insatiable amounts of
Copious Sex;
that never totally Placate but
Crave for Moooaaarrrrrrr),
would You be able to keep Breathing
or would You Asphyxiate on Your
Own Dependencies:
nevermind the aforementioned
questionings; I'm not Unique and only
give Myself to much Shine; We All Suffer
through Our Own, "Terminal Illnesses,"
and, are All, "Beautifully Flawed,"
We All Bleed the same and have
Our Own Faults
But, I've come to terms with Mine;
and, every now and then, We sit
for a while and just talk: they want
Me to, but, "I'll Never Balk,"
"Fucked-up, " in the head, as
I Am, You could continue to
live
Would You Beg Them to unplug
the, "Life-support," as I have
If You had the same Fucking
twisted Mentality that I Tolerate;
(with Pain-killers and Sedatives
and nonstop Liquor Consumption
and insatiable amounts of
Copious Sex;
that never totally Placate but
Crave for Moooaaarrrrrrr),
would You be able to keep Breathing
or would You Asphyxiate on Your
Own Dependencies:
nevermind the aforementioned
questionings; I'm not Unique and only
give Myself to much Shine; We All Suffer
through Our Own, "Terminal Illnesses,"
and, are All, "Beautifully Flawed,"
We All Bleed the same and have
Our Own Faults
But, I've come to terms with Mine;
and, every now and then, We sit
for a while and just talk: they want
Me to, but, "I'll Never Balk,"
Published 22nd Jan 2015
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Anonymous
22nd Jan 2015 12:22pm
This is great Pan, I get what your saying and can totally relate to this my friend.
22nd Jan 2015 11:43pm
Thank You Muse for
Understanding and
for Your Kind words.
I know that You have
also been through a
lot.
It's good to be able
to relate to people.
Pan
Understanding and
for Your Kind words.
I know that You have
also been through a
lot.
It's good to be able
to relate to people.
Pan
Anonymous
23rd Jan 2015 2:50pm
Thank u so much, I know sometimes my comments can seem a little short but it's just I feel sometimes more can be said by saying nothing at all, it can be read in the emptiness between the lines. I take comfort in your friendship and the understanding we have wonderful Pan :)
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22nd Jan 2015 4:51pm
Pan I hear you as one that indulges in alcohol, sedatives and sex.. this is a fierce write about recognizing ones as you put it beautifully flawed.. love the strong ending with love Brenda
