Moral Porpoise

I think this is the first poem i read from you but i am very impressed.

Flowed very well.

Thank you, DevilsChild.  I got a little giddy here.  This is inspired by "Flipper", an old TV show I enjoyed as a kid.  Flipper might actually have been a dolphin.  But dolphins and porpoises are fine mammals, superior to the human species in some respects.  Their level of intelligence, their use of sonar, is awe inspiring.

Kind of wish i was a dolphin, lol.

I love the beach and a roll in the waves.  I just try to keep the sand from where it doesn't belong.  Thank you, Schiitaryn!

ohh that title is just brilliant, crowfly ^.^
i love your whimsical approach to dark poetry... makes me feel less guilty about grinning

Thanks, Katja.  I try to lighten up about the dark.  Doesn't always work but it's worth a shot.

Hey Crow.....most excellent write......brings back fond memories of beautiful shared times in the sand......thank you for sharing these words......xo :)

Thanks, Flower.  I have cherished memories of vacations up in Santa Cruz, which is about 50 miles from San Francisco.  My sister had a place about half a block from the beach, and her boyfriend rode the sands on his horse.  And the women were free spirited and gorgeous.  I wish I'd been just a little older...

Sir Crow,
Giggle! Such a delight to my eyes, needed that smile!
Lady Muse

Lady Muse,
I'm glad you enjoyed the ride!  Not that you're a nag.  You're always welcome!

entertaining to watch her riding that heroic creature like a sea sled. dolphin love...

Porpoises and dolphins are heroic.  They can certainly take on sharks, and have actually done so on behalf of humans.  Thanks, John

Good rhythm and feel. Like it.

Thanks, Katana.  I try to get a rhythm and rhyme going.  It's fun, but sometimes I try to force it, which doesn't work.

I love the title and the and the catchy feel to this piece! Cheers! Scot.

Thanks, Scot.  I find it hard to resist puns and wordplay.  This one's kind of a cartoon.  I've never quite grown up, I guess.

me neither and that's a o k!

But I can hear sweet Flipper squeal
Apparently catching her appeal
Carries the nag back with the tide
Whereupon she thanks him for the ride.


ROTFLMAO! Crow,  Brava!
Zazzles

I'm glad you enjoyed, Zazzles.  "Flipper" was one of my favorite shows as a kid.  Right up there with "Mr. Ed."

Are we showing our age Crow ") lol
Zazzles