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instead of asking her in for coffee, he pointed to his head...
this is where I live -
I would invite you in
but it's a mess...
I would invite you in
but it's a mess...
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Re: instead of asking her in for coffee, he pointed to his head...
19th Jan 2015 2:51am
Paul, my friend,
This piece is so very relateable! :p
But,i can assure you that the 'mess' can be no worse than the clutter of the chaos inside my own
head....
But if you like,you are a l w a y s welcome to come in for tea....
(that is if you don't mind the the monsters crouching in the distant caliginous corners....the demons darting down the darkened corridors...or the dust that has settled atop all those stacked boxes of sorted, and unsorted memories...:)
This piece is so very relateable! :p
But,i can assure you that the 'mess' can be no worse than the clutter of the chaos inside my own
head....
But if you like,you are a l w a y s welcome to come in for tea....
(that is if you don't mind the the monsters crouching in the distant caliginous corners....the demons darting down the darkened corridors...or the dust that has settled atop all those stacked boxes of sorted, and unsorted memories...:)
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19th Jan 2015 11:00pm
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19th Jan 2015 3:19pm
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19th Jan 2015 8:54pm
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19th Jan 2015 11:05pm
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20th Jan 2015 2:43am
re: Re: instead of asking her in for coffee, he pointed to his head...
20th Jan 2015 6:20pm
I said to her, come in if you like,
but be careful where you sit, you
could be squashing my thoughts..:)
but be careful where you sit, you
could be squashing my thoughts..:)
Re: instead of asking her in for coffee, he pointed to his head...
20th Jan 2015 9:37pm
I wouldn't mind taking a gander through that mess. I am guessing I would find exquisite gems and brilliant masterpieces.
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re: Re: instead of asking her in for coffee, he pointed to his head...
20th Jan 2015 10:50pm
or more likely the bric a brac of
a disorderly mind, a jumble sale
rather than an antique stall, but
what the hell, thank you..:)
a disorderly mind, a jumble sale
rather than an antique stall, but
what the hell, thank you..:)
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