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Kiss Me Deep
I want you to kiss me,
the feel of anticipation as your mouth
moves into the shapes of words,
forming a deep desire,
fueling a fire
deep inside me
to be
deep inside you.
But let's start with that kiss.
the feel of anticipation as your mouth
moves into the shapes of words,
forming a deep desire,
fueling a fire
deep inside me
to be
deep inside you.
But let's start with that kiss.
Published 18th Jan 2015
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18th Jan 2015 11:01am
"as your mouth
moves into the shapes of words"
such a simple request, yet it holds a wealth of sensuality.
beautifully written Sammy
moves into the shapes of words"
such a simple request, yet it holds a wealth of sensuality.
beautifully written Sammy
Anonymous
18th Jan 2015 3:38pm
Always bliss with a real good kiss...
18th Jan 2015 7:43pm
18th Jan 2015 8:38pm
Could feel these words sammy....hmmmm.... ;)
Memories of a couple weeks ago when I felt like this....
Memories of a couple weeks ago when I felt like this....
27th Jan 2015 10:23pm
Great poem Sammy - Your words clearly illustrate that heart thumping tension when in the presence of someone you hunger for, and yet there remains this skein of distance.
Sounds like there are some pheromones shared, I hope that the sparks you describe in this piece kindle into the inferno you desire in the near future!
(if they haven't already)
Sounds like there are some pheromones shared, I hope that the sparks you describe in this piece kindle into the inferno you desire in the near future!
(if they haven't already)
28th Jan 2015 6:11pm
