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MY LOVE WITHIN
You are the candle of my eternal soul
Its radiant flame of first, true love.
What is in my heart
can be only seen through caring eyes
and be only known through my breath
No one knows what I possess within
Oh what pain I do endure
to hide my fervor, love, within
Oh what joy, oh what agony
this, the language of gentle love
which can be only sensed and felt
can be only given
and
gained
Its radiant flame of first, true love.
What is in my heart
can be only seen through caring eyes
and be only known through my breath
No one knows what I possess within
Oh what pain I do endure
to hide my fervor, love, within
Oh what joy, oh what agony
this, the language of gentle love
which can be only sensed and felt
can be only given
and
gained
Published 16th Jan 2015
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16th Jan 2015 10:19pm
You reveal great passion here, Naked Soul. And yes the kind of love that can be both given and gained.
17th Jan 2015 11:00am
19th Jan 2015 12:14pm
Pain and passion both go hand in hand. here I have tried to bring the pain with passion. Thanks for your useful comments @crowfly @Sass402
