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Soul Sister
We entrusted sorrows
holding each other
with smiles etched
on our hearts, through
miracles and tears
storms and laughter
celebrating life
large and small
til a cute boy
walked in the class
and all eyes were
diverted, but ours
we shared lunch
sitting side by side
different backgrounds
merging memories
with the same dreams
differences aside
cheered together
on the sidelines
to exhaustion
in the merry go
round of playground
with sheer innocence
holding each other
with change of times
growing up and apart
raising our own families
remembering fondly
the sisterhood
the love, boundless
thicker than blood
my friend, my sister
survivors together
in this life.
holding each other
with smiles etched
on our hearts, through
miracles and tears
storms and laughter
celebrating life
large and small
til a cute boy
walked in the class
and all eyes were
diverted, but ours
we shared lunch
sitting side by side
different backgrounds
merging memories
with the same dreams
differences aside
cheered together
on the sidelines
to exhaustion
in the merry go
round of playground
with sheer innocence
holding each other
with change of times
growing up and apart
raising our own families
remembering fondly
the sisterhood
the love, boundless
thicker than blood
my friend, my sister
survivors together
in this life.
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Re: Soul Sister
16th Jan 2015 12:50pm
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16th Jan 2015 1:06pm
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16th Jan 2015 1:24pm
This gave me chills
Read it twice, same effect
Outstanding emotion and feeling
Going on my list too
Big Like
Read it twice, same effect
Outstanding emotion and feeling
Going on my list too
Big Like
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19th Jan 2015 4:02am
Wow thank you so much!
I'm truly touched.
Btw, love the new pic, looks like the park?
I'm truly touched.
Btw, love the new pic, looks like the park?
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19th Jan 2015 2:28pm
Thx
I think this was the park on Riverside acrosd from Grant's Tomb. That's a great hideaway up there ...
Do you know it ?
I think this was the park on Riverside acrosd from Grant's Tomb. That's a great hideaway up there ...
Do you know it ?
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20th Jan 2015 1:35am
Yes I know it well. Was actually around that way earlier today. Wow! Yes, great hideaway. I used to ride bike on Riverside near 106st.
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19th Jan 2015 4:04am
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16th Jan 2015 1:32pm
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19th Jan 2015 4:06am
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16th Jan 2015 1:33pm
Agree with Speak and by reading your incredibly touching poem I instantly recall my own soul sister who recently recovered from cancer. I was so afraid of losing her, you surely can imagine. Thanks for this absolutely amazing poem, Lena!
Reading list? Sure ...
Reading list? Sure ...
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19th Jan 2015 4:17am
Mi querida hermana, all blessings to you and your soul sister. I'm sure having someone like you by her side helped her fight. This piece is definitely for that bond.
This is also dedicated to a soul sister I met here who hasn't been on DU because she is working on special projects and I'm so proud of her.
Thanks for the RL xoxo
This is also dedicated to a soul sister I met here who hasn't been on DU because she is working on special projects and I'm so proud of her.
Thanks for the RL xoxo
Re: Soul Sister
Anonymous
16th Jan 2015 3:59pm
Lovely write, Lena.. really enjoyed this.. your emotions radiate through this one.. thanks for sharing..
Dave
Dave
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re: Re: Soul Sister
19th Jan 2015 4:20am
Thank you Dave!
I'm all about girl power and sisterhood
I'm so glad it came through ; )
I'm all about girl power and sisterhood
I'm so glad it came through ; )
Re: Soul Sister
16th Jan 2015 6:03pm
Ms Lena,
Words of praise seem feeble, so
I shall send only this ...... <hug of admiration>
I trust you feel it.
Words of praise seem feeble, so
I shall send only this ...... <hug of admiration>
I trust you feel it.
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19th Jan 2015 4:22am
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16th Jan 2015 10:10pm
Soooooo sweet this is! I'm betting this 'jerked' many a tear from your intended... brava mi Amiga :)
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19th Jan 2015 4:24am
She definitely knows it's a dedication to her. She has been a friend, sister and mentor and I appreciate her.
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Anonymous
17th Jan 2015 2:21am
Awe......Sexy Lena......you're beutiulf soul shines in this......wonderful tribute.....enjoyed....xo :)
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19th Jan 2015 4:26am
Thank you so much Flower.....I have also learned so much by reading you ; )
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17th Jan 2015 2:36am
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17th Jan 2015 8:19am
You, my dear... are as deep as the deep blue ocean ! This was touching to read.
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19th Jan 2015 4:32am
What a beautiful thing to say, you made me blush ;)
Thank you for the comment and RL add.
Thank you for the comment and RL add.
Re: Soul Sister
25th Jan 2015 3:11am
I can't even find a better to describe this piece here other than perfection. How does one stop reading this when from the very start of things it glues you in. This was a wonderful read.
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26th Jan 2015 2:38am
Wow! Thank you P.S Holla, I'm humbled by your comment and honored by the RL add.
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26th Jan 2015 6:10pm
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Re: Soul Sister
6th Feb 2015 12:34pm
I'm not really into the subject matter but this is so clearly a well written poem that I enjoyed it anyway! Great work!
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8th Feb 2015 1:02am
Wow I'm definitely glad you read it anyway. Your comments are appreciated greatly ; )
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8th Feb 2015 9:09am
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27th Feb 2015 1:33am
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Thank you kindly Jemac!
It's an incredible honor to have you read and comment and subscribing; )
It's an incredible honor to have you read and comment and subscribing; )
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Anonymous
2nd Mar 2015 1:06pm
It's about time this went on my reading list :)
You will always be....hugzz
You will always be....hugzz
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4th Mar 2015 12:59pm
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Anonymous
3rd Dec 2015 8:50pm
Oh so beautiful, so beautiful such bonds.
always a experience to behold. Thank
you for the opportunity to read of .
always a experience to behold. Thank
you for the opportunity to read of .
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4th Dec 2015 2:24pm
I'm humbled you took the time to read ; )
Thank you so much for the comment.
Sisterhood among little girls and women is empowering.
Thank you so much for the comment.
Sisterhood among little girls and women is empowering.
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Anonymous
4th Aug 2017 6:03pm
Ooooh! giirrll this uplifted me so high, you have no idea how much
i needed such words.
bowing to beautiful
i needed such words.
bowing to beautiful
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4th Aug 2017 6:11pm