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MY SURPRISE

I COME HOME IN THE RAIN SOAKING WET.UPON ENTERING THE HOUSE I FIND ITS EXTREMELY QUIET AND DARK, SO THAT MAKES ME WONDER WHERE YOU'RE AT. I CALL YOUR NAME, BUT RECIEVE NO RESPONSE. THAT HAS ME PUZZLED BECAUSE I'D JUST TALKED TO YOU BEFORE I GOT OFF FROM WORK.I WALK UP THE STAIRS AND HEAD TOWARDS MY BEDROOM. AS I APPROACHED THE DOOR I NOTICED THERE'S A NOTE THAT SAYS: ROSES ARE RED VIOLETS ARE BLUE I HAVE A SURPRISE WAITING FOR YOU. P.S. MEET ME IN THE BATHROOM. I SMILED AS I READ THE NOTE. THEN I TURNED AROUND AND HEAD FOR THE BATHROOM. I REACHED THE BATHROOM AND OPENED THE DOOR. I WAS SHOCKED TO SEE THE BATHROOM DECORATED WITH WHITE ROSES AND VANILLA SCENTED CANDLES. THEN I NOTICED YOU SITTING ON THE EDGE OF THE TUB WHICH IS FILLED WITH A NICE HOT BUBBLE BATH .YOU GIVE ME THIS SEDUCTIVE LOOK THAT LETS ME KNOW EXACTLY WHAT YOU HAVE ON YOUR MIND. WITHOUT SPEAKING WORDS YOU BEGIN TO UNDRESS ME. TAKING OFF MY WET CLOTHES AND PUSHING THEM TO THE SIDE. YOU PLACE ME IN THE TUB. YOU GRAB MY BODY SPONGE AND BEGIN TO WASH MY ENTIRE BODY. YOU START OFF WITH MY NECK, AND THEN YOU SLOWLY MOVE DOWN TO MY BREAST. YOU TAKE MY BREAST ONE AT A TIME AND WASH THEM GENTLY. MY NIPPLES GET HARD FROM YOUR TOUCH. AS YOU WHISPER IN MY EAR HOW YOU CAN’T WAIT TO TASTE THEM. ALL OF A SUDDEN YOU STOP JUMP UP AND SAY I’LL BE RIGHT BACK. I SAY OK AS I SIT AND WONDER WHAT YOU'RE DOING. THEN YOU RETURN AND CONTINUE TO WASH THE REST OF MY BODY. AFTER WE'RE THROUGH WE LET THE WATER OUT OF THE TUB. I GET OUT AND REACH FOR A DRY TOWEL AND YOU TELL ME NO THAT'S WHAT MY TONGUE IS GONNA DO. HEARING YOU SAY THAT MAKES ME SMILE. AS WERE ABOUT TO LEAVE THE BATHROOM YOU PULL OUT A SILK SCARF AND TIE IT OVER MY EYES. THAT MAKES ME EXCITED BECAUSE NOW I'M ANTICIPATING THE REST OF THE SURPRISE YOU HAVE WAITING FOR ME. YOU LEAD ME OUT OF THE BATHROOM AND I FEEL SOMETHING SOFT ON THE BOTTOM OF MY FEET. I REALIZE YOU HAVE ME WALKING ON ROSE PETALS. THEY'RE LEADING FROM THE BATHROOM TO THE BEDROOM.AS WE ENTER THE BEDROOM I FEEL THE WARMTH AND SMELL THE SCENT OF STRAWBERRY CANDLES I ALSO HERE THE SOUND OF R.KELLY IN THE BACKGROUND. YOU PICK ME UP AND LAY ME ON THE BED. YOU SAY THE REST OF YOUR SURPRISE IS ABOUT TO BEGIN. YOU START BY FEEDING ME CHOCOLATE COVERED STRAWBERRIES. WHICH BY THE WAY TASTE SO GOOD WHEN MIXED WITH YOUR TONGUE. AFTER THE STRAWBERRIES YOU GIVE ME A FULL BODY MASSAGE WITH SOME EDIBLE OIL. MY BODY BEGINS TO GET AROUSED AS I FEEL YOUR HANDS CARESS ME. NEXT YOU START TO KISS ME ON MY LIPS THEN YOU MOVE TO MY EARS AND NECK. YOU BEGIN KISSING MY BREAST. YOU KISS AND LICK ALL OVER MY BREAST BEFORE YOU TAKE MY HARD NIPPLE INTO YOUR MOUTH. I CANT WAIT FOR YOU TO MAKE MY OTHER BREAST FEEL THE SAME WAY. THEN YOU SLIDE DOWN TO MY STOMACH AND FLICK YOUR TONGUE IN AND OUT OF MY NAVEL. MY PUSSY IS THROBBING WITH EXCITEMENT FOR YOU. AS YOU MOVE FUTHER DOWN YOU SPREAD MY LEGS AND PLACE A SINGLE KISS ON MY PUSSY LIPS. THEN YOU MOVE TO MY LEGS. YOU PLACE KISSES ON THE INSIDE OF MY THIGHS TIL YOU MOVE ALL THE DOWN TO MY FEET. YOU PLACE EACH ONE OF MY TOES INSIDE YOUR MOUTH AND SUCK THEM SLOWLY. I GIGGLE BECAUSE THE TIP OF YOUR TONGUE TICKLES.THEN YOU TURN ME OVER AND START TO KISS THE BACK OF MY NECK. YOU MOVE LOWER AND KISS MY BACK. THEN YOU LIFT MY ASS TO YOUR FACE AS YOU KISS MY CHEEKS. YOU SPREAD MY CHEEKS AND START LICKING MY ASS. I MOAN BECAUSE IT FEELS SO GOOD AND YOU'VE NEVER DONE THIS TO ME BEFORE. BY NOW MY PUSSY IS NICE AND MOIST. THEN YOU TURN ME OVER AND START TO SUCK ON MY PUSSY.YOUR TONGUE PLAYS WITH MY CLIT FOR A WHILE THEN GOES DOWN FURTHER. YOU PLACE YOUR TONGUE INSIDE OF ME AND I MOAN LOUDER. YOU PAUSE FOR A MOMENT AND GRAB A STRAWBERRY. YOU RUB IT AGAINST MY CLIT. THEN PLACE IT INSIDE OF ME. YOU TAKE IT OUT AND LET TASTE MY JUICES. THEN YOU CONTINUE TO EAT MY PUSSY. I BEGIN TO GRIND MY HIPS AGAINST YOUR FACE AS I FEEL YOUR TONGUE GO DEEPER INSIDE OF ME. I WRAP MY LEGS AROUND YOUR NECK. AND GRAB THE BACK OF YOUR HEAD AS I TELL YOU I'M ABOUT TO CUM. I FEEL MY ORGASM COURSE THROUGH MY BODY. AND MY LEGS GET WEAK. YOU SUCK ON MY PUSSY HARDER TIL YOUR FACE IS COVERED IN JUICES. YOU GET UP LICKING YOUR LIPS WITH A SMILE ON YOUR FACE. THEN YOU CLIMB ON TOP OF ME AND I BRACE MYSELF AS YOU SLIDE YOUR HARD DICK INSIDE OF ME. I FEEL YOUR DICK PENETRATE MY OPENING AND I MOAN BECAUSE I ALMOST FORGOT HOW BIG YOUR DICK WAS. YOU PULL MY LEGS UP INTO YOUR ARMS. SO YOU CAN SLIDE DEEPER INSIDE OF ME. YOU START TO MAKE LOVE TO ME NICE AND SLOW. I FEEL YOU GRIND IN AND OUT OF ME. THEN YOU WHISPER INTO MY EAR AND TELL ME HOW MUCH YOU LOVE ME. YOU DECIDE IT'S TIME FOR ME TO RIDE YOU. I TELL YOU RIDING MAKES ME CUM QUICK. BUT YOU MAKE ME DO IT ANYWAY. I CLIMB ON TOP OF YOU AND EASE YOUR DICK INSIDE OF ME. I TAKE MY TIME AND RIDE YOU. YOU START TO MOAN. THEN YOU MAKE ME BOUNCE ON YOUR DICK. AND AS I'M BOUNCING I FEEL MYSELF ABOUT TO CUM. I TELL YOU I DONT WANT TO CUM YET. BUT YOU SAY BABY DO IT. YOU FEEL MY PUSSY TIGHTEN ON YOUR DICK AND THAT MAKES YOU MOAN EVEN LOUDER. YOU FEEL MY JUICES SLIDE DOWN YOUR DICK.  YOU MAKE ME TURN OVER AND KISS MY CHEEKS THEN SLIDE YOUR DICK IN FROM BEHIND. YOU KNOW HOW MUCH I LOVE THIS POSITION. YOU GRAB MY WAIST AND START TO THRUST YOUR DICK INSIDE OF ME. I'M MOANING REALLY LOUD AND GRABBING THE PILLOWS AND SHEETS. BECAUSE I CANT BELIEVE HOW GOOD THIS FEELS.YOU SLAP MY ASS A COUPLE OF TIMES AND DRIVE YOUR DICK FURTHER INSIDE OF ME. YOU MOAN AS YOU TELL ME HOW GOOD MY PUSSY FEELS. I TELL YOU I FEEL MYSELF ABOUT TO CUM AGAIN. THEN YOU SAY BABY PLEASE WAIT FOR ME. I TRY TO HOLD IT IN BUT YOU THRUST HARDER AND HARDER. MAKING IT VERY HARD FOR ME TO CONTROL MYSELF. YOU SAY BABY I'M ABOUT TO CUM. I SAY ME TOO. THEN YOUR DICK GOES AS DEEP AS IT CAN. AND YOU FEEL MY PUSSY TIGHTEN AROUND YOUR DICK. THAT MAKES YOU CUM EVEN MORE. I BEGIN TO FEEL YOUR HOT CUM SPLASH IN MY PUSSY. I BACK MY ASS UP ON YOU MORE. NOW YOUR MOANING REALLY LOUD. YOU KEEP PUMPING TIL ALL OF YOUR JUICE IS DRAINED. THEN YOU SLIDE OUT OF ME AND REMOVE MY BLINDFOLD, AND KISS ME PASSIONATELY ON THE LIPS. YOU ASKED HOW DID I LIKE MY SURPRISE. I TELL YOU I LOVED EVERY MINUTE OF IT. AND YOU SAY JUST LIKE I  LOVE YOU. AFTER THAT YOU GRAB ME IN YOUR ARMS AND WE FALL ASLEEP.
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