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Among The Roses
my soul runs naked thru misty rain
as clouds cry upon my flesh
I send kisses across waters with the wind
hopefully my intimate thoughts reach you
shared desires corrupt your heart
words of luv and lust
shared only between us
penetrate your soul
clouds tears unite us completely
as fresh rain kisses rose petals
our hearts.....souls....spirits.....
make luv among heavenly purple roses
as clouds cry upon my flesh
I send kisses across waters with the wind
hopefully my intimate thoughts reach you
shared desires corrupt your heart
words of luv and lust
shared only between us
penetrate your soul
clouds tears unite us completely
as fresh rain kisses rose petals
our hearts.....souls....spirits.....
make luv among heavenly purple roses
Published 15th Jan 2015
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15th Jan 2015 3:45pm
20th Jan 2015 00:42am
Thank you Sexy Lady......always appreciate your luving words.....glad you enjoyed this...xo :)
15th Jan 2015 4:17pm
Beautiful, sweet and lightly erotic. Among the roses is right where you belong, Flower. Right at the center.
20th Jan 2015 00:43am
Oh Crow.....you're so sweet and kind......you've made me blush......I'm honored and most flattered...xo :)
15th Jan 2015 4:39pm
beautiful Flower I feel this delicately lovely erotic deeply.. beautiful with love Crim
20th Jan 2015 00:48am
Sweet Crim......always passion in your soul......I'm happy yiu felt this piece......personal to me......thank you.....xo :)
Anonymous
15th Jan 2015 6:16pm
Sweet and beautiful ink my friend :)
20th Jan 2015 00:51am
Thank you Muse......always appreciate your stopping by with your smile and encouraging words.....xo :)
15th Jan 2015 7:54pm
Oh, ES. I see you are corrupting
with your soft, sensual method. :)
Excellent, luving, touching write!
xo
with your soft, sensual method. :)
Excellent, luving, touching write!
xo
20th Jan 2015 00:54am
Sweet EV.....who...me....corrupting??? Dang straight evil one......every chance I get.....LOL!!! Thank you for sparking a devilish smile......xo :)
16th Jan 2015 2:08pm
20th Jan 2015 1:01am
Awe my friend.....I worry about you so.....thank you for the encouragement......xo :)
17th Jan 2015 2:00am
20th Jan 2015 1:02am
Hi Mark.....so happy yiu stopped by my way.......glad yiu enjoyed.....xo :)
18th Jan 2015 6:32am
naked and penetrate
r two words
hard erotica wise
all else is surmise
how can any one rise?
may i ask
no surprise
only souls if any
may rise
r two words
hard erotica wise
all else is surmise
how can any one rise?
may i ask
no surprise
only souls if any
may rise
22nd Jan 2015 4:46am
