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Five more...

I sense you, I know you're here with me
for real love never ends, it will only grow
in my minds eye, I see you so very clearly
my heart feels you, everywhere that I go

I'm aching, for just five more minutes
it doesn't seem like so much to ask for
a chance for a hug and to say I love you
oh what I would give for those five more

now people say, this ache soon shall pass
but for me,  I know that not to be so true
for every single day when I open up my eyes
my heart just breaks again from missing you

I know I can never have those five more minutes
my "I love you" now whispered on winds that blow
but I'll look for you in everything that's beautiful
from sunny skies to light twinkling off morning snow
Written by Deborahlee3313 (poetry in oceans)
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