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Tell Me Friend
What's another jab?
A prick, a prod, a stab?
What's another kick?
A low blow, a dirty trick?
Tell me FRIEND, what's it to you?
Tell me FRIEND, what's left to rue?
What's another lie?
A loss, a reason to sigh?
What's another fight?
A battle, a war, a hellish sight?
Tell me FRIEND, What's left to say?
Tell me FRIEND, what's it you pray?
What's another mistake?
A problem, a new blow to take?
What's another end?
A reminder, a now old friend?
Tell me FRIEND, what's got you caught?
Tell me FRIEND, what's your last thought?
A prick, a prod, a stab?
What's another kick?
A low blow, a dirty trick?
Tell me FRIEND, what's it to you?
Tell me FRIEND, what's left to rue?
What's another lie?
A loss, a reason to sigh?
What's another fight?
A battle, a war, a hellish sight?
Tell me FRIEND, What's left to say?
Tell me FRIEND, what's it you pray?
What's another mistake?
A problem, a new blow to take?
What's another end?
A reminder, a now old friend?
Tell me FRIEND, what's got you caught?
Tell me FRIEND, what's your last thought?
Published 14th Jan 2015
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14th Jan 2015 4:18pm
The affronts progress from a jab to all out war. Then "what's your last thought?" It might be too late. Really clever and fun in its bleak way. Great job, Minerva.
14th Jan 2015 4:24pm
15th Jan 2015 1:05am
Sorry, Miranda. I have a friend here named Minerva and got confused. I'll watch it next time.
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