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Anonymous
11th Jan 2015 3:40am
scintillating truce sounds....fun.
nice little write. i am a fan of the rules of haiku and senryu. you rise to the challenge very well.
nice little write. i am a fan of the rules of haiku and senryu. you rise to the challenge very well.
11th Jan 2015 4:20am
Thanks for reading ... And I enjoy the art form too, both traditional 5-7-5 and non traditional ...
... I find writing haiku & senryu help me shape larger pieces concisely.
... I find writing haiku & senryu help me shape larger pieces concisely.
Anonymous
11th Jan 2015 5:06am
agreed. i feel like if i can say everything i need to in 17 syllables, the i can get the larger stuff to fit better. if that makes any sense at all.
11th Jan 2015 3:53pm
Mo Chara,
This one gives me shivers--
in soo many ways,
and for soo many reasons....
A skilfully scribed senryu that simulates my thoughts!
In its precise presentation, sooo powerful!!
This one gives me shivers--
in soo many ways,
and for soo many reasons....
A skilfully scribed senryu that simulates my thoughts!
In its precise presentation, sooo powerful!!
11th Jan 2015 4:41pm
Hechicera Oscura
Knowing you've connected with this has made my morning. I thought the image was stunning when I came upon it by chance but I knew I wanted to scribe something as stark and hopefully as captivating
Thank you
11th Jan 2015 9:17pm
11th Jan 2015 10:33pm
It is captivating ... I came across it looking for a pic for my lyrics "she blew out the city of lights" ... I saved it and decided to pen a senryu. I may try something lengthier too
13th Jan 2015 00:27am
13th Jan 2015 11:13am
Thank you for the RL add ... I'm glad I painted a picture you could find meaning in. We poets love knowing we've connected.
