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ENVIOUS

I've been trying to do everything right,
But none of them to you seems bright
I've been trying to correct my entire solecism
But still all I get from you are pathetic criticism,
You've been blocking each and every move I make
And disturb each and every path I've been trying to take!
How can you be so envious?
Because my miserable life is just tedious,
How can someone with such life experience still lack responsibility?
Maybe you never been told for your immaturity
For God sake where is your adult morality?
Your envious is as tight as a marriage knot,
In your heart it creates its spot
Now you envious even to yourself how sad.
Written by mkhizenkosingiphil
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