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Rapaciously Hers
By Enigma Rose (crowfly)
Force fantasy and interplay
He demands to have his way
Shoves Enigma to the ground
Drops onto her with every pound
Enigma handles this attack
Flips this asshole on his back
Says "Now isn't this a crying shame
You're the one who picked this game"
Turns out Enigma has the strength
To ride this fuckhead at some length
Says "Things aren't always what they seem
Could this be your chosen dream?"
She offers him a kiss goodnight
But he's frozen in his fright
He watches Enigma come and go
She's the Mistress of this show.
Force fantasy and interplay
He demands to have his way
Shoves Enigma to the ground
Drops onto her with every pound
Enigma handles this attack
Flips this asshole on his back
Says "Now isn't this a crying shame
You're the one who picked this game"
Turns out Enigma has the strength
To ride this fuckhead at some length
Says "Things aren't always what they seem
Could this be your chosen dream?"
She offers him a kiss goodnight
But he's frozen in his fright
He watches Enigma come and go
She's the Mistress of this show.
Published 7th Jan 2015
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Anonymous
7th Jan 2015 4:14pm
I quite like this Enigma. I kind of want to be her best friend.
good write.
good write.
7th Jan 2015 4:24pm
I wish I could introduce you, Minerva. And, wow, I wish I could meet her too. But she's figment of my imagination. But I think I hear her knocking right now! I'm in trouble....
Anonymous
7th Jan 2015 4:26pm
do not deny her. i have a feeling it would be bad.
7th Jan 2015 4:59pm
7th Jan 2015 5:03pm
7th Jan 2015 5:10pm
How interesting...I just envisioned one person acting the characters of two. Interposed. You are gifted Crowfly. :)
7th Jan 2015 8:49pm
Thanks so much Grace. It's possible they could be one person, given the fantasy, but I think of Enigma as a distinct woman taking on all comers, kind of an erotic, female version of Clint Eastwood, if that makes any sense. But she's truly a woman, and doesn't need a magnum.
Anonymous
7th Jan 2015 5:17pm
Love love love this Sir Crow! I feel strangely connected to your Enigma, I understand her. Thank you.
Lady Muse
Lady Muse
7th Jan 2015 8:50pm
8th Jan 2015 10:36am
Tables turned! Go Enigma!
I think your inversions are fantastic.
Very much like this.
I think your inversions are fantastic.
Very much like this.
It's a trip how art opens portals when we use it to resonate. Tapping your inner chambers and discovering the warrior, the man, the woman, the child, the animal, the teacher, the prophet, the trickster, fully disclosing to yourself these archetypes enriches infinitely. The most successful warriors and seducers become the targets of their affection or aggression, bonded so close from relating. It's cool to me to know you've found the fusion point where your female warrior could truly reveal herself to you. Most men are too just too fucking wussy to ever stare into that secret room, much less enter and take a walk with the inhabitant. Brave write, comrade crowfly. Thanks for tapping this deep and releasing this.
