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Sizzles in the Snow
fire burning bright
dancing blue against the snow
bonfire on the ground
heat was cold
mitten hands on cheeks
eyes dreamy looking on
crackling blaze indifferent
to thoughts of days gone by
just sentiments for moments
caught on what has been
or wondering of what ifs
scribbled on fallen logs
fire sizzling on the snow
an arc of patterns
showing the grey soil beneath
dead for a season
a moment of silence
stretched to many cycles
smiles of a day
contentment eternal.
Published 7th Jan 2015
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7th Jan 2015 2:08pm
7th Jan 2015 4:58pm
Hi Soul.:) I love the photos you sent. So serene with the bonfire reflections in the dark. Thank You.
Anonymous
7th Jan 2015 3:14pm
Grace,
The picture is in your words! The crackle and sizzle feel good! :-)
tornado
The picture is in your words! The crackle and sizzle feel good! :-)
tornado
7th Jan 2015 5:01pm
Hi Tornado:) thanks. I love bonfires. It makes me want to dance around it. Haha!
7th Jan 2015 4:52pm
The memory can be selective, which is a mercy. The demons can hopefully be edited out. Fine work, Grace.
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