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TIMELESS LOVE
[font=Times New Roman]TIMELESS AURA
Yet another year passes by and you wonder if your love could fade....
if the longings will pass on and passions be dead?
Age will not wither my cravings, let the ardour swell
Dont push yourself away and dont let the flames quell...
So once again open the door to your secret world when the world is asleep
Remember how i tiptoed in your cyberworld.....the desires still run deep
We need to embrace the magic of touch...the night is still awake
Let your sinful sight cause a storm and make my world quake
Let the screen bring us close again...Let the emotions rise...
Let the smouldering eyes burn my world...lets not pretend its all lies
Let the lust rise from our loins..can now sense it burning red.....
THE LONGINGS WILL NEVER PASS ON AND PASSIONS WILL NEVER BE DEAD
Yet another year passes by and you wonder if your love could fade....
if the longings will pass on and passions be dead?
Age will not wither my cravings, let the ardour swell
Dont push yourself away and dont let the flames quell...
So once again open the door to your secret world when the world is asleep
Remember how i tiptoed in your cyberworld.....the desires still run deep
We need to embrace the magic of touch...the night is still awake
Let your sinful sight cause a storm and make my world quake
Let the screen bring us close again...Let the emotions rise...
Let the smouldering eyes burn my world...lets not pretend its all lies
Let the lust rise from our loins..can now sense it burning red.....
THE LONGINGS WILL NEVER PASS ON AND PASSIONS WILL NEVER BE DEAD
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Re: TIMELESS LOVE
19th Feb 2015 00:53am
the desires still run deep, ah very good write love the passion in your words
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25th May 2015 8:48pm
Your writing, aussieinmumbai, luv, is quite seductive and provocative. ;-*
You are rather fascinating and wonderfully unique in the way you view the erotic.
You are rather fascinating and wonderfully unique in the way you view the erotic.
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13th Apr 2016 3:49pm
I have to agree with Savaja. Very unique expression of erotic. Very nice ~Willow~
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Re. TIMELESS LOVE
1st Oct 2018 1:55pm
Love the repetition in the final stanza ... great cadence and flow with this ...
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Re. TIMELESS LOVE
25th Jan 2019 1:58pm
"Don't push yourself away and don't let the flames quell"
Beautifully said!
Beautifully said!
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Anonymous
21st Apr 2021 3:40pm
Cyber passion oozes through this piece. Connecting with another from a distance can leave us wanting. I felt so much desire within your wonderful words
Gwen :)
Gwen :)
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