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in love
I'm so in love
In love so much
So much it hurts
Hurts down in my heart
My heart is now yours
Yours to do with
Do with as you please
Please don't break it
Brake it into pieces
Pieces that shatter
Shatter on the floor
The floor which you
You could step
Step on my heart
My heart is so full
Full of the love
The love I have for you
You now know it's true
In love so much
So much it hurts
Hurts down in my heart
My heart is now yours
Yours to do with
Do with as you please
Please don't break it
Brake it into pieces
Pieces that shatter
Shatter on the floor
The floor which you
You could step
Step on my heart
My heart is so full
Full of the love
The love I have for you
You now know it's true
Published 5th Jan 2015
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Anonymous
- Edited 6th Jan 2015 2:43pm
5th Jan 2015 1:18am
Someone might step on your heart? How dare they! I'll get 'em for you if they do! Ok?
5th Jan 2015 8:43pm
5th Jan 2015 1:40am
I really like the way this reads, and you constructed it as such... Also very relatable! Cheers! ;)
5th Jan 2015 8:43pm
6th Jan 2015 11:18pm
Great flow.. And i really love the imagery.. This one goes in my list.. thanks for sharing, this brilliant write..
Dave
Dave
7th Jan 2015 3:04am
