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The Art Gallery
You meet a charming man at a café
he strikes up a conversation with you about art
unbeknownst to you he's been watching you for weeks
shadowing your every step
knowing you love art
he'd seen you at the gallery
you start to see him everyday
talking of Picasso and Monet
Jackson Pollock and how you love to paint
One day he tells you "I have a small gallery
I would love to show you
it's not far from here
want to take a ride? i'll take you there"
being a bit weary at first
this man is a stranger
though your better instincts are won over by his charm
so you take a ride with him
because you love art
he's peeked your interest
he says " he has some masterpieces he longs to show you"
your fear starts to rise as the drive
heads into the forest
making excuses how you really don't have time for this
he locks the doors and bashes you on the head
knocking you out
you awaken with a collar around your neck chained to the wall
it's dark and you can't see
he suddenly comes up from behind you
bends you over and enters you violently
he says "you must see my art gallery"
turning on the lights
you begin to scream in horror
Mummified women nude
cut open and on display
posed lewdly
he tells you that you will be his centerpiece
strapping you to a table
begins cutting into you
as you let out blood curdling screams
he laughs taking his time with you
"I said you would enjoy it
now you are a masterpiece"
he strikes up a conversation with you about art
unbeknownst to you he's been watching you for weeks
shadowing your every step
knowing you love art
he'd seen you at the gallery
you start to see him everyday
talking of Picasso and Monet
Jackson Pollock and how you love to paint
One day he tells you "I have a small gallery
I would love to show you
it's not far from here
want to take a ride? i'll take you there"
being a bit weary at first
this man is a stranger
though your better instincts are won over by his charm
so you take a ride with him
because you love art
he's peeked your interest
he says " he has some masterpieces he longs to show you"
your fear starts to rise as the drive
heads into the forest
making excuses how you really don't have time for this
he locks the doors and bashes you on the head
knocking you out
you awaken with a collar around your neck chained to the wall
it's dark and you can't see
he suddenly comes up from behind you
bends you over and enters you violently
he says "you must see my art gallery"
turning on the lights
you begin to scream in horror
Mummified women nude
cut open and on display
posed lewdly
he tells you that you will be his centerpiece
strapping you to a table
begins cutting into you
as you let out blood curdling screams
he laughs taking his time with you
"I said you would enjoy it
now you are a masterpiece"
Published 4th Jan 2015
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4th Jan 2015 11:45pm
And here I thought you were getting all frilly and happy go lucky ;)...
Enjoyed...
Enjoyed...
5th Jan 2015 6:40pm
OMFG!!! I have to tell you, this is truly the darkest side of poetry!
I LOVE THIS! Whoa! Crimson you crazy bitch!!!!
I luv you sis!!!
Jackie
ITRLIG!
I LOVE THIS! Whoa! Crimson you crazy bitch!!!!
I luv you sis!!!
Jackie
ITRLIG!
5th Jan 2015 6:41pm
so pleased and happy you enjoyed this thank you beautiful one with love Crim :)
4th Jan 2015 11:52pm
And they say a relationship with a man who puts a girl on a pedestal will never last.
A delightfully dark read, though I personally wold have stopped somewhere before the unveiling....
A delightfully dark read, though I personally wold have stopped somewhere before the unveiling....
5th Jan 2015 6:42pm
4th Jan 2015 11:54pm
Wow!
Shit just really
went South town.
You have written
a Macabre Masterpiece
that not only children,
but, also adults have
nightmares about.
Hell Yeah... Pan
Shit just really
went South town.
You have written
a Macabre Masterpiece
that not only children,
but, also adults have
nightmares about.
Hell Yeah... Pan
5th Jan 2015 6:43pm
thank you Pan for such an awesome comment though I hope no little ones read something like this.. with love Brenda
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5th Jan 2015 6:46pm
5th Jan 2015 1:02am
scary stuff, mind blower
never talk to strangers, is the take away. or never let strangers take you away ...
Like
never talk to strangers, is the take away. or never let strangers take you away ...
Like
yes I guess it is a cautionary tale I guess I was thinking of Bundy when I wrote this.. thank you Sir Poet with love Brenda
5th Jan 2015 1:11am
Perfect family entertainment! You bring out the beast in me, Lady Crim. Shame....
5th Jan 2015 6:47pm
Sorry bout bringing the beast out in you Sir Crow.. thank you for the visit :) with love Crim
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5th Jan 2015 5:28am
Damn, Brenda. How careless of you.
Should've asked his name. I'll wager it's Hannibal.
Did he offer you liver and fava beans? :)
*I salute the Queen Of Horror.*
Bloody love, ;)
Chad
Should've asked his name. I'll wager it's Hannibal.
Did he offer you liver and fava beans? :)
*I salute the Queen Of Horror.*
Bloody love, ;)
Chad
5th Jan 2015 6:49pm
thank you for the love and smile you gave me with your clever comment :) with love Brenda
Anonymous
5th Jan 2015 10:00am
Hey lady! This is intense! So expertly written my beautiful Sister. Morbid ink!
5th Jan 2015 6:50pm
Anonymous
5th Jan 2015 10:57am
reads like a great episode of C.S.I.
lol
dark and framing the predator by showing the vulnerability of the prey is wonderfully powerful.
see, this is the kind of psycho's really out there though....
great write, Crim
love and hugs xx
lol
dark and framing the predator by showing the vulnerability of the prey is wonderfully powerful.
see, this is the kind of psycho's really out there though....
great write, Crim
love and hugs xx
5th Jan 2015 6:51pm
you're right Miki it does happen in real life.. thank you for getting it and the great comment with love Crim :)
5th Jan 2015 1:52pm
I am not going back to the art gallery - there be strange people hanging about in there :-)
excellent story poem, dark and scary
:-)
5th Jan 2015 6:51pm
5th Jan 2015 4:46pm
so it's date night, huh?
this is a lovely slice of darkness, Brenda, clearly i'm not visiting the right galleries
this is a lovely slice of darkness, Brenda, clearly i'm not visiting the right galleries
5th Jan 2015 6:53pm
beautiful one you made me giggle with your comment lol thank you with love Brenda
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30th Jan 2015 3:13am
Great twist--didn't see that one coming, but those are the best kind of writes, that smack you in the face! <3
30th Jan 2015 3:12pm
