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this game we call life
Gasping for air
In this thing we call life
Falling into an abyss of despair
With Never-ending strife
Emerging into a new world
Not knowing what to do
My vision is now blurred
All I see is you
I can't stop thinking of your face
Falling away from me
I can't help but feel disgrace
Knowing I'm just a memory
Lost without words
In this game we call life
I think I'm on the losing team
Can't you hear me cry?
In this thing we call life
Falling into an abyss of despair
With Never-ending strife
Emerging into a new world
Not knowing what to do
My vision is now blurred
All I see is you
I can't stop thinking of your face
Falling away from me
I can't help but feel disgrace
Knowing I'm just a memory
Lost without words
In this game we call life
I think I'm on the losing team
Can't you hear me cry?
Published 4th Jan 2015
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4th Jan 2015 1:43pm
Nice write - :-)
life unfortunately becomes a game - winning and losing is all relative
:-)
4th Jan 2015 5:34pm
4th Jan 2015 5:05pm
In the end all you will have is yourself. To everyone else you will be a memory.
"My vision is now blurred
All I see is you
I can't stop thinking of your face
Falling away from me"
I like these lines a lot. I think they express very well the feeling of losing someone(in any circumstance) and the loss and confusion it leaves. Nice poem.
"My vision is now blurred
All I see is you
I can't stop thinking of your face
Falling away from me"
I like these lines a lot. I think they express very well the feeling of losing someone(in any circumstance) and the loss and confusion it leaves. Nice poem.
4th Jan 2015 5:35pm
Anonymous
6th Jan 2015 11:20pm
Brilliant.. You're a very talented writer.. I really loved this..
Dave
Dave
7th Jan 2015 3:05am
