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True Beauty
a full moon rising
magical in it’s allure
soothing winds
bring forth the rain
cascading droplets
gathering in
the green fabric
of a leaf belly
this liquid life
harmony so tranquil
feeding the spirit
of simple creatures
balancing cycles
resting in
her tender bosom
lies true beauty
magical in it’s allure
soothing winds
bring forth the rain
cascading droplets
gathering in
the green fabric
of a leaf belly
this liquid life
harmony so tranquil
feeding the spirit
of simple creatures
balancing cycles
resting in
her tender bosom
lies true beauty
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Re: True Beauty
Anonymous
2nd Jan 2015 6:44pm
i see all your previous stuff is gone. but from what i remember, this is much different for you. very good. very, very good!
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re: Re: True Beauty
2nd Jan 2015 8:38pm
Thank you for your kind words.. Yeah, sometimes you have to change directions, and grow a little.. I appreciate your commentary..
Dave
Dave
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2nd Jan 2015 6:46pm
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2nd Jan 2015 8:12pm
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2nd Jan 2015 8:42pm
Thanks, Nick.. Glad you're liking it.. And as always thanks for reading..
Dave
Dave
Re: True Beauty
4th Jan 2015 5:23am
Happy to see you back and killing it in the writing again, my friend. :)
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re: Re: True Beauty
5th Jan 2015 5:08pm
Thanks, mysterious.. it's good to be back.. thanks for the kind words.. glad you liked it..
Dave
Dave
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9th Jan 2015 6:16pm
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9th Jan 2015 6:23pm
Thanks, Anthony.. Means a lot to me.. this was a different attempt for me, style wise.. glad you enjoyed..
Dave
Dave
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Re. True Beauty
Anonymous
19th Jul 2016 4:05am
So very beautiful. Truly adore this piece.
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