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Sweet Thing
wouldn't have gotten to know you
if my heart hadn't been so broken
my mind tortured by rejection
now look back at the past
see hurt as a hidden blessing
cause it led me straight to you
life's path at times is filled with pain
although it's direction is unknown
somehow it always works for the good
you are the good in my soul
our luv has healed devastation in my heart
thought my heart would never stop weeping
miracle of luv has touched me
from my heart to yours always hugging
one soul.....one heart.....one spirit
if my heart hadn't been so broken
my mind tortured by rejection
now look back at the past
see hurt as a hidden blessing
cause it led me straight to you
life's path at times is filled with pain
although it's direction is unknown
somehow it always works for the good
you are the good in my soul
our luv has healed devastation in my heart
thought my heart would never stop weeping
miracle of luv has touched me
from my heart to yours always hugging
one soul.....one heart.....one spirit
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re: Re: Sweet Thing
1st Jan 2015 3:55pm
I'm so glad you've enjoyed this......thank you always a blessing when you you stop by xo :)
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29th Dec 2014 7:37am
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1st Jan 2015 3:56pm
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Anonymous
29th Dec 2014 10:23am
Ahh this is so beautiful. A romantic story of being saved by love..
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re: Re: Sweet Thing
1st Jan 2015 3:58pm
Honestly Muse......it's taken me a lot to open back up to someone......I took my time that's for sure.....thank you for leaving your words with me.....xo :)
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Anonymous
1st Jan 2015 8:40pm
Well I'm so glad u did my friend, keep them coming
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3rd Jan 2015 1:41am
Muse......you're such a sweet soul......my heart still weeps from a heart I still luv very much..... it life moves on.....thanks again...xo :)
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29th Dec 2014 1:13pm
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1st Jan 2015 4:02pm
Sexy Lady......I luved writing this one......glad you like it......thank you....you're alwasy a blessing.....xo :)
Re: Sweet Thing
29th Dec 2014 3:28pm
Doing a happy dance for you, ES. :)
Knowing this:
"miracle of luv has touched me"
Every reason to celebrate! :)
xo
Knowing this:
"miracle of luv has touched me"
Every reason to celebrate! :)
xo
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re: Re: Sweet Thing
1st Jan 2015 4:05pm
Ooooo EV.......what a sexy evil dance that is......thank you for seeing me thru......appreciate you much......xo :)
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29th Dec 2014 4:28pm
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1st Jan 2015 4:06pm
Hi.....I'm so pleased you like this......appreciate you stopped no by my way......thank you...xo :)
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29th Dec 2014 4:31pm
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1st Jan 2015 4:08pm
Re: Sweet Thing
29th Dec 2014 7:27pm
a very beautiful write lovely Flower so glad you found someone that makes you shine so.. with love Crim
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re: Re: Sweet Thing
1st Jan 2015 4:10pm
Thank you sweet Crim......you've alwasy been such and inspiration and support......appreciate you much....Luv and hugs...xo :)
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30th Dec 2014 6:26am
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1st Jan 2015 4:11pm
Hey X.....it sure does heal......specially when it's returned......thank you for alwasy sweet words...xo :)
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re: Re: Sweet Thing
22nd Jan 2015 3:24am
Sweet S......I have found someone who luvs me for just who I am......we will see....I'm holding my heart and guarding my soul......thank you for a heartfelt comment.....xo :)