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Soft Rain
Sunday morning
Quiet rain
Washing earth's core
Contemplative and somber
So much to think about
Choosing to not think at all
Winter, heat on high, windows open
Landlord controlling fate, badly at best
Time for breakfast
Boring sameness awaits
Thinking about something gooey and creamy
Small pleasures in the nether world of thought
Quiet rain
Washing earth's core
Contemplative and somber
So much to think about
Choosing to not think at all
Winter, heat on high, windows open
Landlord controlling fate, badly at best
Time for breakfast
Boring sameness awaits
Thinking about something gooey and creamy
Small pleasures in the nether world of thought
Published 28th Dec 2014
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28th Dec 2014 2:22pm
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28th Dec 2014 2:31pm
Thx for reading and commenting on this little write. This stuff has to emerge, it's the beauty of quiet observation ...
28th Dec 2014 5:11pm
Sir Poet causing me to be in a reflective mood this morning and making me hungry for something creamy :) with love and respect Brenda
28th Dec 2014 5:17pm
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28th Dec 2014 8:42pm
Anonymous
28th Dec 2014 8:36pm
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28th Dec 2014 8:43pm
This was my fave line as well Gabriel/Poet.
The joy in the (naughty?) dichotomy of being able to experience natures extremes, and therefore beauty, whilst retaining slabs of human built comfort.
So well captured in so few words.
The joy in the (naughty?) dichotomy of being able to experience natures extremes, and therefore beauty, whilst retaining slabs of human built comfort.
So well captured in so few words.
28th Dec 2014 8:44pm
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28th Dec 2014 9:17pm
28th Dec 2014 10:27pm
28th Dec 2014 10:27pm
It's always interesting to see what goes on in that mind of yours sir ; )
I like it....I sympathize with the winter heat
I simply brewed coffee and made an omelet
I like it....I sympathize with the winter heat
I simply brewed coffee and made an omelet
28th Dec 2014 11:04pm
Had some plain yogurt, blueberries and pumpkin seeds. Boring but powerful ....
Later on a larabar
Later on a larabar
29th Dec 2014 1:44pm
Funny how certain titles just pull you in
like yours...very nicely done bro!
like yours...very nicely done bro!
29th Dec 2014 2:20pm
Thanks Sir Poet
Never thought this one would get much traction, surprised again ...
Happy New Year Brother
Never thought this one would get much traction, surprised again ...
Happy New Year Brother
30th Dec 2014 3:58pm
30th Dec 2014 5:32pm
Anonymous
10th Jan 2015 4:40pm
Hey poet ..Its something different.
My fav lines or rather stanza is the starting one.
its nice. Your title caught my attention :D
Thanks for sharing :p.
My fav lines or rather stanza is the starting one.
its nice. Your title caught my attention :D
Thanks for sharing :p.
10th Jan 2015 4:53pm
