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End
I finally got to the end of my rainbow
The colours were fading, it was losing its glow
The gold I was promised seemed to be missing
I found absolutely nothing, not even a pot to piss in
Published 25th Dec 2014
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25th Dec 2014 5:05am
David may other rainbows appear on rainy days bringing you what you desire in your heart.. great ink with love Crim
25th Dec 2014 2:51pm
awe,.... thank you very much :-)
hope you have a merry christmas, giftmass, yuletide, or whatever you celebrate
:-)
hope you have a merry christmas, giftmass, yuletide, or whatever you celebrate
:-)
Anonymous
25th Dec 2014 11:19am
Oh sweetie..I personally think that getting to the end is not the right idea, it is the journey of wonder, it is seeing the unnoticed magic all around u along the way..don't worry about the destination of the pot of gold, just enjoy walking the rainbow :)
25th Dec 2014 2:52pm
Walking the rainbow - I really like that :-)
hope you can have a happy christmas :-)
Anonymous
25th Dec 2014 7:44pm
It's a happening lol...hope u smile at least once today and really feel it 😊
25th Dec 2014 9:15pm
25th Dec 2014 11:17pm
I like this, reminds me of a poem I wrote eons ago called "At the End of Every Rainbow" with a humorous twist at the end. Nice write. JJ
26th Dec 2014 00:44am
