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Star
Once I wished upon a star
For money, sex, a fancy car
I wished and wished with all my might
This shooting star, it’s gleaming light
It fizzled, flashed, the light went out
Despite my wish, despite my pout
The power of the star I was negating
I just got tired of fuckin waiting
When you wish upon a star
Makes no difference who you are
Wish for big, wish for small
The star will grant you bugger all
Published 24th Dec 2014
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24th Dec 2014 4:18pm
24th Dec 2014 4:39pm
24th Dec 2014 4:27pm
24th Dec 2014 4:41pm
TY, ty, ty always great to get comments from such an accomplished poet
:-)
Anonymous
24th Dec 2014 7:40pm
Excellent flow...but never give up on wishes :)
24th Dec 2014 9:07pm
26th Dec 2014 12:46pm
Lol, it's true. Gotta wish without expectation, or just simply not bother. Sadly so many waste their time believing in the possibility. It's a nice concept, but the unrealism is just too much for me.
I enjoyed reading this.
I enjoyed reading this.
26th Dec 2014 5:15pm
glad I am not the only one who is realistic or cynical (lol)
glad you enjoyed though
