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Sad
Why is is when you ask for happy?
All anyone know how to give you is. . .
sorrow
sadness
depression
woe
misery
all alone
Why is it when I ask for happy?
To remember the good times you had.
All anyone knows how to remember.
is the memories that make me really depressed.
And when I'm reading those memories,
thoughts, stories all fashioned into the style of poetry.
It just makes makes me feel so bad.
And then it gets me so fucking mad.
No one listens anymore!
And then I read it again.
And I feel guilt for them, the memories they have.
And in the end, it just makes me really, really sad.
All anyone know how to give you is. . .
sorrow
sadness
depression
woe
misery
all alone
Why is it when I ask for happy?
To remember the good times you had.
All anyone knows how to remember.
is the memories that make me really depressed.
And when I'm reading those memories,
thoughts, stories all fashioned into the style of poetry.
It just makes makes me feel so bad.
And then it gets me so fucking mad.
No one listens anymore!
And then I read it again.
And I feel guilt for them, the memories they have.
And in the end, it just makes me really, really sad.
Published 24th Dec 2014
| Edited 14th Sep 2017
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13th Jan 2015 7:15pm
It's frustrating when you feel ignored and all those feelings do usually end up in a sad place at the end, enjoyed...
Critiques:
S1, L1, The word 'is', is used twice. Should be is it, yes?
S1, L2, seems like there's an 'S' missing from the word know...
S6, L1, Two of the word 'makes' there, though, that could be on purpose I suppose...
Critiques:
S1, L1, The word 'is', is used twice. Should be is it, yes?
S1, L2, seems like there's an 'S' missing from the word know...
S6, L1, Two of the word 'makes' there, though, that could be on purpose I suppose...
