His body with Hers

For me, there's just something about a man's
mouth on nipples that drives me crazy good.
As always I appreciate you reading me Gabriel,
and for your words. Thank you :)

you write the most tender delicate yet sensual erotic beautiful Tommie :) with love Crim

I just write what I feel...so glad you enjoy it Crim thank you very much :)

When you were away I was missing this kind of writing

So glad you are back ....

Well thank you dear Poet..that means a lot.
I missed this place :)

And your picture totally KICKS ASS

Oh my, thank you sweet Poet! ;)

The imagery of the sword against the crushed velvet is very good.  it suggest something regal.  it conjurs up the old world.  

Glad you got that SensualKarma...thank you for reading :)

Tommie Lynn,

A sensual ride through the peaks :-) Enjoyed!

tornado

Thank you tornado :)

river deep, mountain high. sensual poetics, Tommie...

Always appreciate you reading me John thank you :)

Synchronization with mi brujita is exquisite ... Sexy piece Tommie

Thank you LSP :)

Favourite lines the first two of verse two.

Thanks SS :)

Rhyming comments - on verse one:

This verse celebrates the breasts
As lovemaking interests.

on your profile pic:

Tommilynn, that cleavage bare
Suggests a well rounded pair!
These King Henry loved to kiss
On the chest of Boleyn (Miss).

Love that SS, funny you would
create a write using King Henry,
I just watched The Tudors and loved it.
Thanks :)

Super sexy, Tommie! I'm intrigued by "He gives to her gathering place." It's a beautiful line.

Glad you liked it GW, thank you :)

Thanks Vishal :)