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"Impetus"
Two years prior she smiled that smile
Teasing, neon, translating
Attraction, intimate desire
Then, as now her every gesture
Advertising consistent
Warmth, an incredible pleasure
Constant, without duplicity
Never punishing hot/cold
Rather, affection willingly
She relates as a revival
This flattering compliment
A driving force, "You're the ......." (title)
*December 21, 2014*
Published 23rd Dec 2014
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23rd Dec 2014 4:49pm
24th Dec 2014 8:29pm
I always appreciate the love, Brenda.
Thank you for your uplifting words.
Love back at ya, :)
Chad
Thank you for your uplifting words.
Love back at ya, :)
Chad
24th Dec 2014 5:05pm
Agree with Brenda VP...
Someone who lets you know exactly where you stand with them...no games...a beautiful person for a beautiful man... :)
Someone who lets you know exactly where you stand with them...no games...a beautiful person for a beautiful man... :)
24th Dec 2014 8:36pm
Kate, you said it. "No games," is positively priceless.
Regarding the, "person" and the, "man" ...
completely agree with the former, respectfully
disagree with the latter. :)
You consistently inspire.
I thank you!
Regarding the, "person" and the, "man" ...
completely agree with the former, respectfully
disagree with the latter. :)
You consistently inspire.
I thank you!
25th Dec 2014 2:06am
Sweet EV......could she be the answer to your prayers and wishes......tears weld up in my eyes.....what a beautiful soul she must be to appreciate such a man who stands before her......wow.....thank you for sharing such beautiful emotions with us.....luv and hugs......xo :)
25th Dec 2014 4:19pm
My sincere gratitude, ES, for your
gracious, encouraging words.
She is genuine.
Luv and hugs back at ya, :)
xo
gracious, encouraging words.
She is genuine.
Luv and hugs back at ya, :)
xo
