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"Watching"
Sitting on the couch, she's stretched to my right
Partially dressed, red plaid nighty
Her head rests on my thigh
Brushing her hair, eyes close, she sighs
Thoughts, anticipation
Builds, visible in a big smile
As she lay watching scenes behind
Long eyelashes, pleasing
Her, and I, knowing what's in mind
*December 22, 2014*
Published 23rd Dec 2014
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23rd Dec 2014 11:39am
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24th Dec 2014 5:07pm
24th Dec 2014 8:25pm
24th Dec 2014 11:41pm
Time for her to use the 'Bone-A-Phone' that has limited, creamy nationwide minutes.
25th Dec 2014 4:21pm
25th Dec 2014 1:58am
Oooooo EV......sensual and beautiful......nice calm peaceful feeling I got from this.....enjoyed....xo :)
25th Dec 2014 4:22pm
26th Dec 2014 6:28am
That was great, I loved the imagery it was displaying however I wished it was a little more longer.
26th Dec 2014 10:59pm
I appreciate your favorable feedback, Ms RJ.
The intention, a condensed recollection of events
which led to something a bit more intense. :)
The intention, a condensed recollection of events
which led to something a bit more intense. :)
26th Dec 2014 11:49pm
Glad you do appreciate my feedback and it was pretty good keep it up :)
