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Aw ... I truly love your wonderful senryu. "glass slipper broken" this line (and not only this) is so brilliant! Kudos, dear LSP!

This senryu grew out of a number of things ... The last line came after seeing the coming attraction for the new "Cinderella" movie ... I've loved that story since I was 5

Thanks for commenting

Thank you were kind words on this short piece ... Much appreciated

your dark depths, of course,
are more than matched by
the origins of the Cinderella tale,
which gives the poem a nice
symmetry...

It's very insightful on your part that you noticed that ... I actually wrote the first two lines Friday morning ... Saw a movie preview and remembered loving the fairytale, and somehow the proverbial shoe fit

Right on target
So direct

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Glad you can feel it

You write many of my very favorite 5-7-5s.

Thank you for the read and compliment ... I'll humbly say I'm progressing - comments like yours are motivation.