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Women
A plethora of sinful treats
Beautifully wrapped
To entice the mind
Mouth watering candy
In all sizes and shapes
Uniquely tasting but
Addicting nevertheless
It is difficult
To limit yourself
To only one
(C) 2014 XMAR82 ALL RIGHTS RESERVED
Beautifully wrapped
To entice the mind
Mouth watering candy
In all sizes and shapes
Uniquely tasting but
Addicting nevertheless
It is difficult
To limit yourself
To only one
(C) 2014 XMAR82 ALL RIGHTS RESERVED
Published 18th Dec 2014
| Edited 3rd Feb 2017
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18th Dec 2014 2:48am
18th Dec 2014 1:32pm
You smell sweet and although techniques may be similar, all kisses taste different.
18th Dec 2014 10:07am
Like it xmar...
especially 'in all shapes and sizes...uniquely tasting...addicting nevertheless...'
especially 'in all shapes and sizes...uniquely tasting...addicting nevertheless...'
18th Dec 2014 1:36pm
Xmar I love this write and the ending put a wicked grin on my face :) thank you with love Crim
18th Dec 2014 11:56pm
I am happy that I was able to bring a smile to your sweet face Crim. Stop by any time.
19th Dec 2014 1:37am
Oh yeah, you nailed this one my friend!
Fantastic poem...and Thank you for writing it. :)
Fantastic poem...and Thank you for writing it. :)
19th Dec 2014 2:35am
19th Dec 2014 4:58pm
That's quite a way of describing women :-). Reveals the attitude of at least one man. If not of every man :-). I like this poem, x(y)mar82 :-).
20th Dec 2014 2:54am
20th Dec 2014 3:39am
Luv this X.....all this time I've been trying to understand a situation......this wirte just brought me my answer......glad I came across this.....LOL!! xo :)
20th Dec 2014 5:01am
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Anonymous
22nd Dec 2014 2:43pm
while it is an interesting take on my gender, i would hope that you do have self control. :) nice write.
24th Dec 2014 4:46am
All good things in moderation Minerva. Thanks for stopping in. Drop in any time.
Anonymous
24th Dec 2014 4:58am
moderation is key. of that, i am a firm believer! :) and who am i to talk. just today i wrote about preying on the opposite sex. ha!
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7th Feb 2015 8:19pm
In praise of the proverbial eye candy. Favourite lines:
Beautifully wrapped
To entice the mind.
Brings to mind a photo of Marilyn Monroe or some other sensuously dressed actress in frocks.
Beautifully wrapped
To entice the mind.
Brings to mind a photo of Marilyn Monroe or some other sensuously dressed actress in frocks.
8th Feb 2015 3:50am
