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Welcome to the Fall...
The nether regions of conscious
never gave me reason to sit
unconsciously within discontent
spent extended amounts of time
within these maligned confines
of mind, now darkness calls...
Welcome to the fall...
subfuscous matter permeates
the membranes, putrid blood splatter,
a new portrait of pain
stains the canvas of a soul's
wall...
Welcome to the fall...
some will never see it at all
the maestro of malfunction
finally stumbles too deep
into the tunneled hall...
New deposit, no return
somethings are never learned
sincerity, security... only not
bequeathed to thee, the eye so
bewildered by human flippancy
honor... must be akin to infamy
I shudder when I bawl, welcome
Welcome, thy haggard life...
to the fall...
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Re: Welcome to the Fall...
17th Dec 2014 1:46pm
great the way you've spun this
the wording is very good
made my list Poe xD
the wording is very good
made my list Poe xD
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re: Re: Welcome to the Fall...
18th Dec 2014 00:39am
Honored to have made ur list my sweet Rose!
Thank you much n appreciate you always :)
Thank you much n appreciate you always :)
Re: Welcome to the Fall...
17th Dec 2014 3:58pm
Poe you always have a great flow.. this one with a powerful message.. great ink with love Crim
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re: Re: Welcome to the Fall...
18th Dec 2014 2:14pm
Thank you sweet Crim, you're so wonderful... Truly deeply
appreciate all your support! :)
appreciate all your support! :)
Re: Welcome to the Fall...
17th Dec 2014 4:01pm
Wow Poe!
I took the day off and am enjoying some writing in between and I think I going to keep revisiting this one all day.
Powerful indeed ;)
I took the day off and am enjoying some writing in between and I think I going to keep revisiting this one all day.
Powerful indeed ;)
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re: Re: Welcome to the Fall...
18th Dec 2014 2:16pm
Well a day off for reading with me included is a huge compliment, n I'm greatly humbled n honored! Thank u my sweetheart, always :)
Re: Welcome to the Fall...
17th Dec 2014 4:03pm
The notes formed while reading this splendid poem of yours aloud, Poe. A deep message poem which I very much like!
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re: Re: Welcome to the Fall...
18th Dec 2014 3:14pm
My dear Chi, you truly humble me n im seriously
happy that you find my ink worth your time... :)
happy that you find my ink worth your time... :)
Re: Welcome to the Fall...
18th Dec 2014 10:30am
The second read aloud a few hours later shows me how powerful you words are PM...
your poetry is amazing.... :) xo
your poetry is amazing.... :) xo
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re: Re: Welcome to the Fall...
18th Dec 2014 3:51pm
You are amazing my sweet K! Thank you so much
I'm honored n humbled by your support :)
I'm honored n humbled by your support :)
Re: Welcome to the Fall...
18th Dec 2014 2:58pm
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18th Dec 2014 3:54pm
Aaaawwww Mami... U make my heart sing... :)
Thank you so very much, I feel so touched
n truly appreciate you... :)
Thank you so very much, I feel so touched
n truly appreciate you... :)
Re: Welcome to the Fall...
18th Dec 2014 5:01pm
Top Notch Scribe Poetik... Excellent flow and wordplay,loved the intensity and repetition..."Welcome to the fall" ahhh its like free falling in deep dire darkness...very appropriate for the melancholy alot of people feel this time of year...I know holidays always bring me down...so this totally suits my mood right about now...Well Penned my friend ...enjoyed as alway
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re: Re: Welcome to the Fall...
18th Dec 2014 5:22pm
You pretty much hit it on the head my dear
I'm not usually too down, but something happened
that made it very dark at this point n this came out...
Thank you so much I'm grateful :)
I'm not usually too down, but something happened
that made it very dark at this point n this came out...
Thank you so much I'm grateful :)
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27th Dec 2014 11:49pm
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31st Dec 2014 11:16am
Aaaaawwwww my sweet precious... I love your response
to it! :) grateful forever n deeply appreciate
you as well :)
to it! :) grateful forever n deeply appreciate
you as well :)
Re: Welcome to the Fall...
5th Jan 2015 10:54pm
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6th Jan 2015 5:11am
Thank you, I'm happy to hear you liked my piece of darkness
Though I try not to stay there much as possible lol
Though I try not to stay there much as possible lol