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Freeway
Defects driving quite a load
Carpe diem down the road
Corpse dropped from the overpass
Windshield starred to shattered glass
Easy Rider gets a blast
Pellets flying from the past
Steve McQueen in under drive
Catch him on the news at 5
Leaving behind the daily grind
Dropping off the lies that bind
I just hit accelerate
Could be I'm better dead than late.
Carpe diem down the road
Corpse dropped from the overpass
Windshield starred to shattered glass
Easy Rider gets a blast
Pellets flying from the past
Steve McQueen in under drive
Catch him on the news at 5
Leaving behind the daily grind
Dropping off the lies that bind
I just hit accelerate
Could be I'm better dead than late.
Published 16th Dec 2014
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16th Dec 2014 4:31pm
16th Dec 2014 4:51pm
Thanks, Crim. It's been a long time since I've done any driving. I kind of miss it, even those overpasses.
16th Dec 2014 4:35pm
Good, confident writing with style and wit. Love the Steve McQueen reference. Your work reminds me of the Jesus and Mary Chain, one of my fave bands, LOL. Love it.
16th Dec 2014 4:48pm
Thank you, toniscales. I also enjoy Jesus and Mary Chain, particularly "Psychocandy." It's hard to top "Lips Like Sugar."
Anonymous
16th Dec 2014 6:38pm
Nice! I love to drive too...sometimes u wish u could just keep going...
16th Dec 2014 11:24pm
16th Dec 2014 9:48pm
Crow once again u not only entertain but make us think
Excellent ink dear friend
Excellent ink dear friend
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20th Dec 2014 3:19am
Crow......very thought provoking write......has several different meanings......depends on your mood I thnk.....xo :)
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