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danger angels
last train outa nowhere
catch it if you can
runnin alleys blind
collided with the candy man
tales of faded glory
adrift on bloodied shores
palsied days in drunk tanks
nights were ransomed on whores
a drifter survives by guile
the hustle becomes an art
I’ll steal your blushing sex
& break your reckless heart
her pretty ass gets branded
when she’s across my knee
command a slut, submissive
& craving under me
heaven keeps a journal
the sins you’ll never tell
dreams die hard tomorrow
become my bride…in hell
exploited gun, a single bullet
naked with a stranger
spin the chamber – let it pop
my angel loves the danger
Published 14th Dec 2014
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14th Dec 2014 3:42am
Really concise and powerful, hard-bitten and hardboiled. Some of these lines could be the title of a film noir ("naked with a stranger"), others show the effects of a long and scarred life ("dreams die hard tomorrow"). Sounds like you've been around the block once or twice. Me too. And angels get the drop on me every time.
14th Dec 2014 4:08am
14th Dec 2014 4:23am
Fierce piece. This makes me feel very naive, soft and lucky. Tough dark stuff.
14th Dec 2014 5:48am
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14th Dec 2014 4:43pm
John a dark devilish, honest write with perfect flow.. excellent with love Crim
14th Dec 2014 8:42pm
Oh that 3rd stanza was wickedly wild and witty...love the rugged raw feel of this...Well Crafted Ink John...enjoyed as always!!!
15th Dec 2014 2:16am
The unbridled passion of the chaos we all dream to be and feel from our mundane lives. Yet the heart break of getting stuck in such a life is painfully easy to see. You sink my heart while Igniting it into flames. Brilliant
15th Dec 2014 3:59pm
Oh Mr Candy Man
What a dark n erotic write....Russian Roullette has never been a temptation until I read how it flowed from ur pen
Mr Feddeler u never disappoint
U take us all on such high impact erotic adventures sir
What a dark n erotic write....Russian Roullette has never been a temptation until I read how it flowed from ur pen
Mr Feddeler u never disappoint
U take us all on such high impact erotic adventures sir
17th Dec 2014 00:04am
17th Dec 2014 1:40pm
Shootin' from the hip on this one! love it, John.
"her pretty ass gets branded
when she’s across my knee
command a slut, submissive
& craving under me" .... YES, Sir. Just gotta love this intensity!
"her pretty ass gets branded
when she’s across my knee
command a slut, submissive
& craving under me" .... YES, Sir. Just gotta love this intensity!
Short, stylish, n severing verses..aww, got me quite well inside this dangerously dark work in shivers;) tq as ever JF
