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"Commands"
Showering
Before and after
It's what she enjoys
Beyond needing a Master
I wash her hair
Bathe, caress every inch
When she's unsuspecting
Her ass receives a good pinch
She jumps and giggles
Typically offering chatter
With nervous energy before
More relaxed after the matter
Desiring tight restraint
Nipple clamps and more
Craves it deep in her throat
Enjoys gagging until she's sore
Pleads for it hard, "... in my fucking cunt"
This, her route to squirting victory
She commands the limits
I command the delivery
*May 24, 2014*
Published 13th Dec 2014
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13th Dec 2014 10:36pm
A man who delivers that's what I love.. sexy erotic written by a man of caliber.. with love Brenda
15th Dec 2014 1:28am
You know what they say, Brenda.
Flattery will get you everything. :)
Thank you for such high compliments.
Feeling the love and reciprocating,
Chad
Flattery will get you everything. :)
Thank you for such high compliments.
Feeling the love and reciprocating,
Chad
14th Dec 2014 1:52am
Oooo EV......I'm adding a sexy shower slave to my Christmas list.....enjoyed this sexy piece very much....xo :)
15th Dec 2014 1:31am
I hoped to eventually make your list, ES. :)
It's about time! ;)
Glad you enjoyed it.
Thank you! :)
xo
It's about time! ;)
Glad you enjoyed it.
Thank you! :)
xo
14th Dec 2014 5:49am
had a sexy shower yester morning...having flashes of the waters skiing on her ivory skin
15th Dec 2014 1:36am
Thank you for the comment, sukre.
That's a great start to any morning.
Welcome to the DU!
That's a great start to any morning.
Welcome to the DU!
15th Dec 2014 00:12am
15th Dec 2014 1:39am
Comforting, enticing remarks, Ms Lena. ;)
I thank you for sharing your reaction.
I thank you for sharing your reaction.
