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Last Rites
Vampyros Lesbos beckon me
Vixens far as I can see
Looks like their lips are dripping wet
But could be just the fangs I get
I see that they've already stripped
So I lay down inside their crypt
Looks like that it's just my luck
These last rites are my final fuck.
Vixens far as I can see
Looks like their lips are dripping wet
But could be just the fangs I get
I see that they've already stripped
So I lay down inside their crypt
Looks like that it's just my luck
These last rites are my final fuck.
Published 13th Dec 2014
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Anonymous
13th Dec 2014 3:23pm
Giggle! Love this :P
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13th Dec 2014 4:41pm
Thanks, Grace. I'm very fond of sleazy European horror films, and "lesbian vampires" is my favorite subgenre. A matter of taste. Mostly bad, in my case.
13th Dec 2014 5:01pm
Crowfly a beautifully written dark erotic with a strong ending excellent with love and respect Crim
13th Dec 2014 5:11pm
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13th Dec 2014 8:34pm
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15th Dec 2014 12:13pm
I remember Hammer films so well from early teen years. Fantasies such as this were my favorite way to die daydreams. Thanks for writing this, crowfly!
15th Dec 2014 4:20pm
Hammer films were great. They don't make them like that any more. Thanks, Loki.
15th Dec 2014 4:26pm
But Crow....what a way to go sir
Giving yourself over to the dark Biden's within it mind.
Dark n erotic most definitely
Made my own fangs emerge hun
Giving yourself over to the dark Biden's within it mind.
Dark n erotic most definitely
Made my own fangs emerge hun
15th Dec 2014 4:46pm
